Question

【题目】请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。

Dear editor,

I was shocked by the news that neighbors of a German university protested to the government that some students often gathered and shouted at night, disturbing local residents. They demanded if the students were not dismissed, they would move out of the area.

I want to ask those young people: When you were letting off screams, were you aware that you were damaging other people’s normal life?

This doesn’t happen by chance. I often witness similar things in our country, too. For example, throwing waste water onto the streets and spitting in public places can frequently be seen. Some tourists litter casually or even carve their names on ancient scenic spots! Many young people are fond of jumping queues and never offer their seats to the elderly.

All over the world, people are beginning to worry that civilized behavior is a thing of the past. In fact, civilized behavior can help bring trust from others and success in the fierce world market competition. Therefore, increasing the quality of citizens is becoming urgent.

Anonymous

[写作内容]

1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;

2. 以约120词就“文明礼仪”这一话题谈谈你的认识，内容包括：

(1) 从和谐社会建设和个人成长发展的角度论述“文明礼仪”的重要性；

(2) 联系实际，谈谈你打算如何做一个文明守礼的中学生。

[写作要求]

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

[评分标准]

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】Neighbors of a German university protested and pressed the university to dismiss the students who made noises and disturbed their lives. Nowadays uncivilized behaviour has become a matter of common occurrence worldwide and needs to be taken seriously.

It goes without saying that civilized behaviour is of vital significance. On the one hand, our country is constructing a harmonious society and it is the duty of everyone to make individual contributions in the transition period. On the other hand, a person’s inner being can surely affect his development and achievement. Good manners are a magnet for more trust, assistance, and even contribute greatly to the ultimate success.

As a middle school student, I will conscientiously observe the discipline of my school to truly maintain the school’s image. Besides, I feel an inner urge to be civilized with my language, behaviour and appearance to strengthen the bonds with my fellow classmates.

【解析】

这是一篇读写任务，要求考生概括文章的主要内容，就“文明礼仪”这一话题谈谈你的认识。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

要求：1. 用约30个单词概述文章的主要内容;

2. 以约120词就“文明礼仪”这一话题谈谈你的认识，内容包括：

(1) 从和谐社会建设和个人成长发展的角度论述“文明礼仪”的重要性；

(2) 联系实际，谈谈你打算如何做一个文明守礼的中学生。

3. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

Neighbors; protest; dismiss; disturb; uncivilized behaviour; a matter of; common occurrence; It goes without saying that; harmonious society; make individual contributions; affect; magnet; the ultimate success; conscientiously; the discipline of; inner urge；appearance；strengthen the bonds

第三步：连词成句

1.Neighbors of a German university protested and pressed the university to dismiss the students who made noises and disturbed their lives.

2.Nowadays uncivilized behaviour has become a matter of common occurrence worldwide and needs to be taken seriously.

3.It goes without saying that civilized behaviour is of vital.

4.On the one hand, our country is constructing a harmonious society and it is the duty of everyone to make individual contributions in the transition period.

5.On the other hand, a person’s inner being can surely affect his development and achievement.

6.Good manners are a magnet for more trust, assistance, and even contribute greatly to the ultimate success.

7.As a middle school student, I will conscientiously observe the discipline of my school to truly maintain the school’s image.

8.Besides, I feel an inner urge to be civilized with my language, behaviour and appearance to strengthen the bonds with my fellow classmates.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改