假设你是新华中学的学生李华.想邀请来兰州参加淘宝网甘肃馆一周年庆祝活动的阿里巴巴首席执行官马云来你校做一次成人礼的演讲.请你给马云首席写一封邀请信.内容包括:1．说明写信的目的,2．说明演讲的具体安排--时间:4月28日,地点:学校礼堂.主题:怎样通过个人奋斗实现人生理想,3．表达感谢与祝福．注意:1．词数100左右.开头和结尾已为你写好.不计入总� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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7．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，想邀请来兰州参加淘宝网甘肃馆一周年庆祝活动的阿里巴巴首席执行官马云来你校做一次成人礼的演讲，请你给马云首席写一封邀请信，内容包括：
1．说明写信的目的；
2．说明演讲的具体安排--时间：4月28日；地点：学校礼堂，主题：怎样通过个人奋斗实现人生理想；
3．表达感谢与祝福．
注意：1．词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：毕业典礼演讲 adult ceremony speech
Dear Mayun，CEO of Ali Baba，
My name is Li Hua．I'm a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School．May I have the honor to invite you to give us an adultceremony speech on behalf of all the teachers and students of our school？The speech is scheduled to be given on April，28 at the school hall，the theme of which will behow to realize our dreams through personal efforts． We are eager to hearyou talk about your own experiences and unique views． I sincerely hope youcan take your time from your busy schedule，and I would appreciate it very much if you can come．Thank you in advance andwish you all the best．
I am looking forward to receiving your reply at your earliestconvenience．
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua．

分析本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封信，邀请来兰州参加淘宝网甘肃馆一周年庆祝活动的阿里巴巴首席执行官马云来校做一次成人礼的演讲．
写作要点包括：1．说明写信的目的； 2．说明演讲的具体安排：时间：4月28日；地点：学校礼堂；主题：怎样通过个人奋斗实现人生理想； 3．表达感谢与祝福．写作时应以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称为主．
重要短语：invite sb to do sth（邀请某人做某事），on behalf of （代表），be scheduled to（预计，计划做某事），realize our dreams （实现某人的梦想），be eager to （渴望做某事），in advance （提前），adapt to （适应）．
【高分句型】
1．The speech is scheduled to be given on April，28 at the school hall，the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams throughpersonal efforts．
这里是"介词+which/who"引导的非限制性定语从句，具体结构为"the+名词+of which/who"，在从句中作主语．演讲预定于4月28日在学校礼堂举行，主题为"怎样通过个人奋斗实现人生理想"．
2．I would appreciate it very much if you can come．
这是it作形式宾语用法，真正的宾语是if you can come．如果你能来我会很感激．

解答 Dear Mayun，CEO of Ali Baba，
My name isLi Hua．I'm a student from Xinhua High School． May I have the honor to invite you to give us an adultceremony speech on behalf of all the teachers and students of our school？（说明写信的目的） The speech is scheduled to be given onApril，28 at the school hall，the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams throughpersonal efforts．【高分句型】We are eager to hear youtalk about your own experiences and unique views．（说明演讲的时间、地点、主题）
I sincerely hope you can take your time from your busy schedule，and I would appreciate itvery much if you can come．【高分句型】Thank you in advance and wish you all the best．
I am looking forward to receiving your reply at your earliestconvenience．（表达感谢与祝福）

Yours sincerely
Li Hua

点评提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．