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5．假定你是李华，要邀请在你校交流的英国学生Peter到翠湖公园参加英语角活动．请根据以下图画给Peter写封英文邮件，告诉他路线，并希望他周日上午九点从所住的宾馆出发，到达公园正门．

（1）．字数100左右，开头已经给出．
（2）．可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        
                                                                  Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是看图作文，根据所提供的一幅图和所给要点信息给Peter写一封英文邮件，告诉他周日上午九点从所住的宾馆出发，到达公园正门．又属于提纲作文．
在写作时人称用第一人称和第二人称．时态为一般将来时和一般现在时．
重要短语：invite sb to do sth （邀请某人做某事），attend our English corner （参加英语角），be familiar with （熟悉），go straight along…（径直沿着…走），turn right （向右转），be expected to do（被期望做某事），arrive at sp（到达某处），look forward to sth/doing（期望做某事）．
【高分句型】
1．I'm writing to invite you to attend our English corner，which will be held in Cuihu Park this Sunday morning．
这里是which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，指代前面主句的内容．
2．On the opposite is just Cuihu Park．
这里是倒装句型，介词短语置于句首，构成全部倒装．即"介词短语+谓语+主语"．

解答 DearPeter，
I'm writing to invite you to attend ourEnglish corner，which willbe held in Cuihu Park this Sunday morning．【高分句型】Since you're not familiar with our city，I'll show you the way．（目的）
When you come out of your hotel，go straight along the road and turnright on the first corner．You will see a hospital on your left．Then walk along the road towards north，and you can find a restaurant．On the opposite is just Cuihu Park．【高分句型】You are expected to arrive at the maingate before 9 o'clock．I'm sure you can find us easily．（路线）
Looking forward to your coming．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 看图作文要求将画面所包含的有效信息用文字表达出来，并适当拓展并发挥想象．如果是记叙文类的素材，要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；如果是说明文或议论文，首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．