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3.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack来信说,他暑假后将到北京大学留学.请你根据以下内容给他写一封回信,告知有关情况.
(1)简单介绍北京大学;
(2)生活便利、居民友善;
(3)留学期间,愿提供任何帮助.
注意:词数100左右:开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Jack,
I glad to know that you will come to China for further study.Now let me tell you what you are concerned with.
                               
I'm looking forward to meeting you in Beijing.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文,根据所提供的材料,写一封信,告知美国朋友Jack有关北京大学留学的情况.写作要点包括:1.简单介绍北京大学;2.生活便利、居民友善;3.留学期间,愿提供任何帮助.写作时应以一般现在时为主.人称以第一人称和第三人称为主.重要短语:be concerned about (关心),be famous for (因…著名),get improved (提高),worry about (担心),be located in(位于),It is extremely convenient for you to live there (住这是极其方便的),be hospitable to …(好客的),if necessary(如果必要).

解答 Dear James,
I'm glad to know that you will come to Chinafor further study.Now let me tell you what you are concerned about.
    As is known to us,Beijing University is one of the top universities in China,which is famous for its excellent teaching in art and culture.【高分句型】Studying there,you are sure to get improved inevery aspect.(简单介绍北京大学)This is the first time for you to live in a foreign country alone,but yon don't need to worry about the life there,because it is located in thebusiness center of Beijing.【高分句型】Therefore,it is extremely convenient for you to live there.Besides,most people in Beijing are both kind and hospitable to foreigners.(生活便利、居民友善)
    I'd like to help you find a proper host family nearby the university if necessary.【高分句型】(留学期间,愿提供任何帮助)
    I'm looking forward to our meeting in Beijing.

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点,并适当增加细节.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.

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Americans celebrate Thanksgiving with much warmth and keep many traditional customs.Here we introduce two of the rules Americans typically follow on this day.
1.Time for prayers and paying back
Thanksgiving Day has been associated with prayers in church and in homes for centuries.Attending church prayer services in the morning is the first step of many celebrators on Thanksgiving Day.The churches provide worship (礼拜) services and organize special events for the occasion.
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(1)以约30个词概括上文的主要内容.
(2)以约120个词谈谈你对是时候感恩了的想法,内容包括:
(1)你认为我们中国人有没有必要过"感恩节"?为什么?
(2)以你自己的经历或者身边的人为例,阐述重视感恩的必要性;
(3)总结你的观点.
写作要求
(1)作文中可以使用实例来支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容论述,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
(2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.
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概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯.
This passageis mainly about the customs of a western traditional festival,ThanksgivingDay,which mainly includes the two rules that Americans usually abide by duringthe festival.
Afterreading the passage,I had a better understanding of Thanksgiving Day.In myopinion,since the festival has a lovely and healthy theme,why not do as theAmericans do?Don't you think giving thanks to things and people around us isvery necessary?We can't deny it is a good chance to spread kindness andconsideration.
Take myselffor example.Because I am busy in studying on weekdays,I have little time tolook after my parents,which makes me guilty.In order to reward them and makethem relaxed on the weekend,I get up early in the morning and preparebreakfast for them willingly,which makes them delighted.
So it isvital for us to have a grateful heart and show our thanks to anything good andany person that is nice..

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