Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他暑假将来北京参加“外国人唱中国歌大赛”，希望你为他推荐一首中文歌曲。请给他回邮件，内容包括：

1.推荐曲目；

2.推荐理由；

3.你的祝愿。

注意：1.词数不少于100；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

How is it going? I'm so glad to hear you will come to Beijing and participate in the Chinese Singing Competition for Foreigners this summer vacation. For the song to choose, I highly recommend Moli Hua, Jasmine Flower, which is representative of Chinese-folk music.

My recommendation is based on the following reasons. First of all, it enjoys wide popularity, so there's no doubt it will attract the audience's attention once you start to sing. Moreover, this song has beautiful melody and simple lyrics, which are relatively easy for you to learn in a short time. At the same time, the soothing tunes will make your learning process pleasant and comfortable. I bet you are bound to stand out among all the competitors.

I sincerely hope my recommendation can be helpful and wish you a wonderful performance. When you come to Beijing, remember to let me know, since I'd like to be there to cheer for you.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。文章要求写一封电子邮件，就你的英国朋友Jim暑假来北京参加“中国歌曲演唱大赛”的参赛歌曲给出建议。内容包括推荐的曲目、推荐该曲目的原因以及对他比赛成功的祝愿。

分析题目可知，文章要求写一封建议邮件，内容包括推荐的曲目以及为什么要推荐这首歌，这是一般事实，因此全文可使用一般现在时。本篇文章的要求较为简单明确，因此可发挥的空间较多，但关于推荐理由要详细描述。

文章可采用三段式的结构。第一段介绍了作者写邮件的目的，即欢迎朋友到北京来参加比赛，并推荐朋友在比赛中唱茉莉花。第二段为邮件的正文部分，详细介绍了推荐唱茉莉花的原因，其中包括这首歌传唱度非常高；歌曲的旋律和歌词非常优美；曲调非常舒缓学习起来非常的享受。第三段则表示了作者对朋友参加比赛的美好祝愿。