Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的朋友 Peter上次来访后惊叹你们家乡的巨大变化，回去后写信询问你们是如何在实践中将“绿水青山就是金山银山”化为生动的现实的。

要点：1.简要介绍之前存在的问题；2.具体整改措施及带来的好处。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am glad to have received your letter asking about how we put “Lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets” into practice. Here is something about it.

Several years ago, a couple of economic zones were built to attract investors aiming at developing the economy. Unfortunately, all the efforts were in vain due to the poor natural environment. Only then did the government realize the importance of green hills and clear waters. Therefore, concrete measures were taken to beautify the environment such as preventing pollution, planting trees and so on, which contributed to a brand-new natural environment with birds singing in the forest and fish swimming in clear water. Owing to the inviting environment, more and more people came to visit and invest, which in turn led to a boom of our economy.

Looking forward to seeing you again in my hometown. I am sure you will like it better.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Peter回信介绍如何在实践中将“绿水青山就是金山银山”化为生动的现实的。

第一步: 审题

体裁: 应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构: 总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

简要介绍之前存在的问题。

具体整改措施及带来的好处。

第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组)

be glad to；a couple of；be supposed to do；aim at；looking forward to

第三步: 连词成句

I am glad to have received your letter asking about how we put “Lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets” into practice. Here is something about it.

Several years ago, a couple of economic zones were built to attract investors aiming at developing the economy.

Only then did the government realize the importance of green hills and clear waters.

Owing to the inviting environment, more and more people came to visit and invest, which in turn led to a boom of our economy.

Looking forward to seeing you again in my hometown. I am sure you will like it better.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand,while,as for

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步: 润色修改