题目内容
7.假定你是学生会主席李华,你校以"弘扬中国文化,促进校际交流"为宗旨,将于 5 月 25-30 日在天津海河举行龙舟赛.请根据以下内容,给姐妹学校剑桥中学(Cambridge High School)校长写一封信,邀请他们的龙舟队参加比赛.内容要点:
(1)写信目的
(2)活动时间、地点和意义
(3)回复时间:2017 年 5 月 10 日前
注意:
(1)词数 100 左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)开头语已为你写好.
参考词汇:Dragon Boat Race 龙舟赛Dragon Boat Festival 端午节.
Dear principal,
I am LiHua,chairman of the Student Union.I'm writing to invite your school to take part in our school's upcomeing Dragon Boat Race from May 25th to 30th on Haihe River in Tianjin.
The event is a fantastic opportunity for our schools to develop closer ties and to promote cultural exchange.The annual Dragon Boat Festival is one of China's most important cultural events,in memory of the ancient poet QuYuan,who drowned himself after being falsely accused of corruption.It will provide students the chance to learn from each other,improve their boating skills and promote friendship.
We know that Cambridge High School has an outstanding boating team and would love you to take part.We'd appreciate hearing from yourr eply before May 10th.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构.比如I'm writing to invite your school to take part in our school's upcoming Dragon Boat Race from May 25th to 30th on Haihe River in Tianjin中使用了不定式短语做状语.The annual Dragon Boat Festival is one of China's most important cultural events,in memory of the ancient poet Qu Yuan,who drowned himself after being falsely accused of corruption中使用了介词短语及非限制性定语从句,在It will provide students the chance to learn from each other,improve their boating skills and promote friendship中使用了三个不定式短语作定语等.这样使文章内容更具有层次感,也使内容更加连贯.
解答 Dear principal,
I am Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union.I'm writing to invite your school to take part in our school's upcoming Dragon Boat Race from May 25th to 30th on Haihe River in Tianjin.(高分句型一)
The event is a fantastic opportunity for our schools to develop closer ties and to promote cultural exchange.The annual Dragon Boat Festival is one of China's most important cultural events,in memory of the ancient poet Qu Yuan,who drowned himself after being falsely accused of corruption.(高分句型二)It will provide students the chance to learn from each other,improve their boating skills and promote friendship.(高分句型三)
We know that Cambridge High School has an outstanding boating team and would love you to take part.We'd appreciate hearing from your reply before May 10th.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 本篇书面表达是一篇提纲作文.提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
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1.表明写作意图;
2.询问相关信息:是否有原始购机发票(invoice),是否维修过,如何付款.
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总次数.
Dear Heck,
I am writing for more information about the laptop advertised on the school bulletin board.I would appreciate it if you could be kind enough to answering the following question.(高分句型一)First of all,do you still have the original invoice for the laptop?Secondly,I would like to know whether the laptop has any problems.Have you ever had it repaired?Lastly,where and how can we conclude a deal if both of us agree to one?By the way,would it be possible to give me a 10% discount considering the storage of the laptop is rather small.(高分句型二)
I am looking forward to your reply
Yours,
Li Hua.
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