Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的朋友Tom邀请你下周去他们学校参加文化交流活动并邀请你向外国朋友介绍中国传统绘画。但你忙于准备下周的考试，不得不拒绝邀请。请根据下面的要点用英语写一封电子邮件：

1.谢绝邀请；2.说明理由；3.推荐朋友王云参加，并说明原因（如从小学习绘画，很了解中国传统绘画以及英语口语情况和个性情况等）

注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation.________________ ______________________________________

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Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation.

I’d like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t. The reason is that I am busy preparing myself for the coming final examination.

I strongly recommend my friend Wang Yun, who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week. She began to learn painting at an early age and has a good knowledge of the traditional Chinese painting, which, together with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help make your activity a success.

Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是电邮，也就是信件的格式，可采用三段式或四段式。首先要感谢邀请，其次要委婉谢绝，并说明原因；再次，推荐朋友王云参加，并说明原因，提示中有，可以适当增加内容；最后，再次表达歉意。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用：The reason is that I am busy preparing myself for the coming final examination.非限制性定语从句的使用：I strongly recommend my friend Wang Yun, who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week；……which, together with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help make your activity a success.