题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,今年6月8日到英国旅游,在伦敦希斯罗(London Heathrow Airport) 出口处拾到一个手提箱,你把它交给工作人员,他们非常感谢你,同时请你做一份情况说明。
要点如下:1. 拾者简明信息;
2. 事情经过;
3. 物品描述(样式、颜色、大小等)
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
I’m Li Hua, a high school student from China._________________________________________________
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I wish the owner could come back soon and get it!
Li Hua
【答案】I’m Li Hua,a high school student from China.I’m here in England for my holidays.At around 8:30,on the morning of June 8th, I Found a lost suitcase near the exit of London Heathrow Airport.I waited there for some time,but nobody came for it.
I handed it in to the information center,It is a black suitcase of rectangle shape.Its size is just as big as a school bag.When picked,the suitcase was half open and ther were some documents and a camera in it.
I wish the owner could come back soon and get it!
Li Hua
【解析】本篇作文是开放性作文。开放性作文要求学生根据提供的情景,在短时间内写一段文字。开放性作文更能反映出考生的综合素质和真实的写作水平,更有利于开展中学生英语素质教育,更符高考改革趋势。
亮点:本文要点齐全,语句通顺,语言地道。在句式方面,使用了许多简单句。一个复杂句,一个并列从句,一个固定句式,同时也使用非谓语作状语,虚拟语气等。同时使用主动,被动时态等,使文章生动丰富。
复杂句:When picked, the suitcase was half open and there were some documents and a camera in it.
并列句:I waited there for some time, but nobody came for it.
非谓语作状语:When picked, the suitcase was half open
虚拟语气:I wish the owner could come back soon and get it!
固定句式:Its size is just as big as a school bag.