Question

4．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以"感恩母校"为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程．
注意：词数不少于60．
提示词：视频video

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Having had （1）a heated discussion，we agreed on （2）making a video to record our experiences at school．经过热烈的讨论，我们一致同意制作视频记录我们在学校的经历．
（1）having had 现在分词完成式做时间状语，相当于after引导的时间状语从句；分词做状语是书面表达的亮点句型．
（2）agree on 取得一致意见．
句型二：
Material collecting took us a whole week，during which （1）we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life（2）．收集材料花费了我们整整一个星期；在此期间我们采访了老师，拍摄了我们学校生活的每一方面．
（1）during which 在此期间，which引导的非限制性定语从句，which指代上文的a whole week，非限制性定语从句是书面表达中常用的高分句型．
（2）every aspect of school life学校生活的每一方面
句型三：
We debated over （1）what to put into（2）the video．我们就把什么材料放进视频进行辩论．
（1）debate over 就…进行辩论．
（2）what to put into the video为"疑问词+to do"相当于一个名词性从句，本句中相当于一个宾语从句；书面表达中运用"疑问词+to do"会使得表达简练．

解答 Graduation finally came．My classmates and I decided to do something．Having had a heated discussion，we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school【高分句型一】（图片一：决定制作视频）．
       Material collecting took us a whole week，during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life【高分句型二】（图片2：收集视频材料）．The editing part after that was tough．We debated over what to put into the video【高分句型三】．Some compromises were unavoidable，but the video turned out perfect．（图片3：视频取舍和制作） Several days later，when the video was played on the graduation ceremony，it was well received（图片4：视频展示）．The students and teachers shared a great time，which surely gave us a great sense of achievement（结论）．

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点．其次要考虑高分词语和句型的选用，从句、非谓语动词、倒装、强调句型等都是可考虑的高级句型；词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．