题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,留学生Andy对中国诗词很感兴趣,想找一名共同学习者。请写信向他推荐你的一位同学,内容包括:
1.介绍该同学的基本情况;
2.推荐理由;
3.表达期望
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Andy,
I’m more than pleased to know that you are quite interested in Chinese poems and want a co-learner. It is my pleasure to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang, who also loves them.
Firstly, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard, but also behaves well. Secondly, he stands out for his Chinese, especially in poems. Last but not least, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.
Therefore, I recommend him to you with all my heart and I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信,向留学生推荐一名共同学习者。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表明目的
2.介绍相关情况
1)介绍该同学的基本情况。(introduction to this student)
2)推荐理由。(reasons for recommendation)
3) 表达期望。(expectation)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
more than; be pleased to; be interested in; diligent; behaves; stand out; especially; be willing to; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m more than pleased to know that you are quite interested in Chinese poems and want a co-learner.
2. who is among the most diligent students in our school
3. not only studies hard, but also behaves well.
4. he stands out for his Chinese, especially in poems.
5. he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.
6. I am looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改