题目内容
5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
The other day I ran into an old schoolmate of my,Sally Barber,while I was at the cashpoint.I hadn't seen her for age.I wanted to catch up with her,so I suggested go for a cup of coffee.Unfortunately,Sally's a very busy woman,but she didn't have time for a coffee.Let's meet late in the week,I suggested.That is often the case,Sally looked in her diary,and said we could get together for lunch at 1pm on Friday at her favorite restaurant.I thought it was a very much smart place,so I had dress in for the occasion.I arrived at a restaurant in good time.I finished my dessert by the time she turned up-she was an hour late!
分析 本文主要讲述作者遇到了很久没有见到的老同学Sally Barber,作者提议去喝咖啡,但Sally Barber说忙.她约定在周五她最喜欢的餐馆聚会,但当她出现时,已迟到了一小时.
解答 The other day I ran into an old schoolmate of my,Sally Barber,while I was at the cashpoint.I hadn't seen her for age.I wanted to catch up with her,so I suggested go for a cup of coffee.Unfortunately,Sally's a very busy woman,but she didn't have time for a coffee.Let's meet late in the week,I suggested.That is often the case,Sally looked in her diary,and said we could get together for lunch at 1pm on Friday at her favorite restaurant.I thought it was a very much smart place,so I had dress in for the occasion.I arrived at a restaurant in good time.I∧finished my dessert by the time she turned up-she was an hour late!
详解:
1.my改为mine 考查代词.of是介词,后接名词性物主代词mine.
2.age改为ages 考查固定搭配.for ages意为"很长时间",是固定搭配.
3.go改为going或go前加we 考查动名词.suggest后动词时用动名词形式,或在go前加we,suggest后接宾语从句时用虚拟语气,即从句谓语动词用should+动词原形,should可省略.
4.but改为so/and 考查连词.前后两个单句表示因果关系或顺承关系,用连词so/and.
5.late改为later 考查副词.later意为"后来",late意为"迟,晚",此处应是前者.
6.That改为As 考查定语从句.as is often the case意为"这是常有的事",是固定搭配,as的先行词是后面整个句子Sally looked in her diary.
7.去掉much 考查副词.very修饰形容,very much修饰动词,smart是形容词,用very修饰,much是多余的,要去掉.
8.in改为up 考查词语用法.dress in意为"穿着…衣服",dress up意为"打扮,梳理",此处应是后者.
9.a改为the 考查冠词.此处restaurant是第二次提到,用定冠词表示特指.
10.加had 考查动词时态.根据句中时间状语从句by the time she turned up-she was an hour late,要用过去完成时态.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
A. | why | B. | that | C. | whether | D. | which |
A. | will build | B. | will be built | C. | is built | D. | was built |