Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华，学校将举行每年一次的18岁成人仪式，请你给外教Steven写一封电子邮件邀请他参加活动。内容包括：

时间：3月12日上午9点至11点

地点：学校大礼堂

对象：全体高三师生和家长

活动意义：内容自定

注意：1.词数100词左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好。

参考词汇：成人仪式coming-of-age ceremony; 礼堂auditorium

Dear Steven,

I would like to invite you to the annual Coming-of-age Ceremony of our school._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Steven,

I would like to invite you to the annual Coming –of –age Ceremony of our school. As you know, it’s very important for us because from that moment on we are no longer children but adults, which means we should have a sense of duty for our society. Therefore, we will treasure the moment forever.

As scheduled, the ceremony, which is to take place in the school auditorium, will start at 9:00am on March 12. And it will last for two hours. And we will make an oath together, show our thanks to our parents, and put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing during the ceremony.

All the students in Senior 3, accompanied with their parents and their teachers will be present.

I am looking forward with great pleasure to seeing you. We do hope you can come.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇电子邮件，文章内容已经列出，在写作文时应注意以下几点：

1.通篇应用一般现在时。

2.要点应齐全，但不可对要点进行简单罗列，要用适当的连词使全文流畅，衔接自然。

3.注意语气。写作难点在第四条上，要写出成人礼的意义，要符合现实并且一定要通过简单的例子来支撑，否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。这部分可以采取简单句与复合句结合的办法。

【范文亮点】：

采用非限定性定语从句（it’s very important for us because from that moment on we are no longer children but adults, which means we should have a sense of duty for our society；the ceremony, which is to take place in the school auditorium ）等高级句式。

采用as you know, therefore,and等连词，使文章连贯顺畅。

结尾语气自然，符合信件结尾要求。