Question

【题目】假定你是李华，计划寒假找份兼职工作。下面的招聘广引起了你的注意，请根据要点（箭头所指内容）写一封申请信。

注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
3）开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's winter camp.
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's winter camp. I'm very interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job.
To begin with, I gain much experience of working with children from my part-time job as a babysitter. Besides, I have been a helpful assistant for both my English teacher and my classmates. More importantly, I can speak English fluently, which will help me work with native teachers from England. I will be available for the work on evenings and weekends and can start working from the end of this term. I would really appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】考查应用文写作。要求以李华的身份写一份申请信。所以本文使用第一人称和一般现在时；本文对学生的要求较高，首先要读懂原文要求：招聘助理教师，要求能够在冬天参加工作，和来自英国的老师一起工作，课堂上只能讲英语，每天晚上工作。要点：1 .知悉对方要招聘助理教师，对此职位很感兴趣并认为自己有资格能胜任这一工作。2 .做过班长，英语流利，这有助于和外籍教师交流；晚上和周末有空闲时间做兼职工作；3 .希望得到对方的回复。本文同时属于应用文，要注意书信的格式和串联语。建议文章使用多样化的句式，让句式富有变化，不死板。