题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,英国高中生Peter在中国研学时曾暂住你家。他回国后给你寄来礼物感谢你的招待,并在信中委婉表示对你家三世同堂感到惊讶。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)感谢对方赠送的礼物;
(2)简要介绍中国人三世同堂的现象。
注意:1.词数120左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm so delighted to receive your letter and know you are safe back. Thank you for sending me the book, which is really a feast of western culture. I enjoy reading it very much.
Since you seem to be surprised at the fact that in China, three generations—grandparents, parents and children, often live together, it will be my pleasure to explain this phenomenon to you. As our living conditions improve, it's unnecessary for several generations to live to get her any more. However, many Chinese still tend to live together because they can help and care for each other. Besides, by living together, all family members can develop a strong sense of belonging, as well as strengthen their emotional bonds.
Hope to see you in China again. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生回一封感谢信,并介绍中国人三世同堂的现象。
第一步:审题
结构:三段式
时态:一般现在时
第二步:列提纲
第一段:问候并表达感谢
第二段:介绍三世同堂
第三段:祝福并期待下次见面
第三步:列举重点短语和句型
receive your letter;a feast of western culture;be surprised at ;
a strong sense of belonging;as well as;strengthen their emotional bonds
第四步:连句成篇
I'm so delighted to receive your letter and know you are safe back.
Thank you for sending me the book, which is really a feast of western culture.
Since you seem to be surprised at the fact that in China, three generations—grandparents, parents and children, often live together.
As our living conditions improve, it's unnecessary for several generations to live to get her any more.
Many Chinese still tend to live together because they can help and care for each other.
All family members can develop a strong sense of belonging, as well as strengthen their emotional bonds.
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,如however, besides等,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改