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3．假如你是李华，是一家英文报社的记者，你的家乡正在遭受洪水袭击，请你根据以下提示给报社写一篇100词的报道．
1．大雨持续三天三夜，田野、村庄全部被淹；
2．昨夜洪水爆发，村民在水中挣扎；
3．解放军全力抢救，村民转移到堤岸
4．政府关心，帐篷、食物、药品、衣物等陆续到达．
参考词汇；解放军PLA men．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给报社写一篇100词的报道，报道家乡正在遭受洪水袭击，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：大雨持续三天三夜，田野、村庄全部被淹；昨夜洪水爆发，村民在水中挣扎；解放军全力抢救，村民转移到堤岸；政府关心，帐篷、食物、药品、衣物等陆续到达．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为昨夜家乡遭受洪水袭击．第二部分为社会各界的大力帮助．
重点短语与句型：
Not only…but also不但…而且
wash  away 冲走
care for关心
高分句型一：Last night，the flood washed houses away and the villagers were in danger and struggling in the water，crying for help．此句用了现在分词crying 作伴随状语
高分句型二：Without the government，a large number of people would have lost their lives in the flood or died of hunger此句用了含蓄虚拟条件句

解答 The heavy rain has been pouring down all the time for three days．Not only fields but also villages have been flooded．Last night，the flood washed houses away and the villagers were in danger and struggling in the water，crying for help（高分句型一）．（昨夜家乡遭受洪水袭击）
Just then，the PLA men hurried over by steamboat．They did their best to save villagers and helped them to move onto the riverbank．The government cared for the villagers very much．Tents，food，clothes and medicine were sent to them without delay．Without the government，a large number of people would have lost their lives in the flood or died of hunger（高分句型二）（社会各界的大力帮助）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．