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12.What can you do when you are unhappy?If you want to let out your anger or pressure by breaking things,you just do.Now a school in Nanjing has built a"stress wall"to help students who feel unhappy due to heavy schoolwork or for other reasons.
The leader of the school said the idea of a stress wall started when footprints were found on some newly painted walls and some school windows were broken.
"These things happen because some students feel lots of pressure from their studies or because they don't get along well with other students.When under stress,the body gets ready to either run or fight and becomes very nervous.Hitting the wall can help relax the body and take away stress,"he said.
"Tests and homework make me sad,"said a junior girl,"I can't wait to hit the wall.It will help me a lot with my problems."However,another girl student who wouldn't give her name said,"The wall won't help because it can't talk,"and she added,"I need to talk to someone when I'm sad."
【写作内容】
(1)以约30个词概括这段短文内容;
(2)以约120个词就"Should the stress wall be built"主题发表你的看法,包括以下要点:
 ①学生的压力来源;
②是否该建此墙并说明理由;
③提供一些其他有效的减压方法.
【写作要求】
1.可以参照阅读材料但不得直接引用原文的句子;
2.作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称.
3.不必写标题.

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
The passage conveys to us that to help students with stress,a school built a"stress wall"for students to relax,towards which students hold different opinions
这篇文章告诉我们,为了帮助有压力的学生,学校建立了一个"压力墙",让学生放松,对学生持不同的观点.
高分句型二:
For one thing,even if students punch the wall heavily,the true stress in the bottom of their hearts can not be let out.
一方面,即使学生冲墙重,在内心深处的真实应力不能出去.

解答 The passage conveys to us that to help students with stress,a school built a"stress wall"for students to relax,towards which students hold different opinions(高分句型一).
Nowadays,students are under great pressure,mainly coming from their school work as well as peer relationship.
As far as I am concerned,building a stress wall is not appropriate.For one thing,even if students punch the wall heavily,the true stress in the bottom of their hearts can not be let out(高分句型二).For another,this may lead to the results of solving a problem with violence of fixing a bad temper,which has bad effects on their health growth.
In order to decrease our stress,here are my suggestions.To begin with,we can design more outdoor activities for students to get rid of the stress.What's more,it is strongly suggested that we can take part in some sports events,which can surely help students out of stress and improve their health at the same time.All in all,only when we let out the stress properly can we live a happy school life.

点评 本书面表达为议论文,议论文是对某现象或观点进行点评.写作时,应注意按提出、分析、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排文章结构,使用足够的论据来分层次论证自己的观点.

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