题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校象棋( Chinese chess)俱乐部将举办象棋比赛。请你用英语给你的交换生朋友 Leslie写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1. 比赛时间和地点;
2. 参加比赛的意义;
3. 报名方式及日期。
注意1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Leslie,
A Chinese chess competition will be held at 2:00 pm in the school gym on December 15th. Knowing that you like playing Chinese chess, I am writing to invite you to take part in it.
As far as I am concerned, this competition is very meaningful. To begin with, you can play chess with different opponents, which can promote your chess-playing skill. Besides, it is a great chance to make more friends with other students. If you are interested in it, please sign up at the office of the chess club before December 10th.
I am looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一封邀请信的应用文。写一封邀请信邀请你的交换生朋友参加象棋比赛。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.比赛时间和地点。A Chinese chess competition will be held at 2:00 pm in the school gym on December 15th. 写信的理由(增补内容):知道你会下象棋,所以写信邀请你参加。Knowing that you like playing Chinese chess, I am writing to invite you to take part in it.
2. 参加比赛的意义。先下定义,参加比赛很有意义。As far as I am concerned, this competition is very meaningful. (增补内容)首先,你可以和不同的对手博弈,以提高棋艺。To begin with, you can play chess with different opponents, which can promote your chess-playing skill.其次,是一个很好的交结其他好朋友的机会。Besides, it is a great chance to make more friends with other students.
3. 如果你感兴趣,请在12月10日前到棋艺俱乐部办公室报名。If you are interested in it, please sign up at the office of the chess club before December 10th.
4.表示期盼回应。I am looking forward to your participation.
第二步:列提纲(重点词组及句型)
a Chinese chess competition;will be held;like playing Chinese chess, I am writing to;invite you to;take part in;as far as I am concerned;this competition is very meaningful;To begin with;with different opponents;promote your chess-playing skill;it is a great chance to;make more friends with other students;If you are interested in it;sign up;at the office of;the chess club;looking forward to your participation.
第三步:连词成句
A Chinese chess competition will be held at 2:00 pm in the school gym on December 15th.
Knowing that you like playing Chinese chess, I am writing to invite you to take part in it.
As far as I am concerned, this competition is very meaningful.
To begin with, you can play chess with different opponents, which can promote your chess-playing skill.
Besides, it is a great chance to make more friends with other students.
If you are interested in it, please sign up at the office of the chess club before December 10th.
I am looking forward to your participation.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/ doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result, not because…but because…
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改