题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你是李华。校学生会正在举办“魅力中学生”评选报名活动,旨在给学生提供展示风采的舞台,为大家树立学习的榜样。下面的海报吸引了正在你校访问的美国学生Catherine的关注。请向她介绍此次活动,并阐述你心目中“魅力中学生”的标准。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.首句已给出,不计人总词数。
The poster is about a selection registration named Charming Students.
【答案】
The poster is about a selection registration named Charming Students. This activity, organized by Students’ Union, provides us with a stage to show our talents and also sets us students examples to follow. Anyone who is willing to participate in this activity is allowed to apply online. And the application deadline is May 20th.
To be charming students, in my opinion, they should be someone popular with us, positive to life, kind to people and always ready to help others. Besides an excellent academic performance, they are also supposed to do well in various aspects, such as singing, dancing, painting and sports. Having a creative mind is equally important.
【解析】
试题分析:考查半开放性作文。半开放性作文留给考生发挥的空间比较大。一般只提供一个话题或一个图片,要求考生合理地进行想象。考生在写作时,需要做到以下几点:第一、认真审题,把握所有信息。第二、确定体裁,把握行文格式。第三、罗列提纲,思考表达方式。第四、 组织语言,展开写作。 写作时,运用熟悉的英语词汇、句型等;要尽量运用多样化的句式,注意长短句的结合、简单句和复合句的结合;要注意上下文的衔接,过渡要自然。本文要求考生介绍“魅力中学生”这一活动,并阐述出心目中“魅力中学生”的标准。
【亮点说明】本篇习作内容充实,条理清晰,结构完整。第一段主要介绍这一活动,而第二段主要阐述了作者心目中魅力中学生的标准。习作中使用了多种表达方式,如非谓语动词担当状语:This activity, organized by Students’ Union, provides us with a stage to show our talents、还有定语从句,如:Anyone who is willing to participate in this activity is allowed to apply online.。