题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Ladies and gentlemen,
It's my honor to give a speech here. After-class activities play a important part in our school life. Proper activities help enrich our lives, broaden our horizons or develop our personalities.
Mine own experience can serve as a case in point. When I was in Senior One, I become a member of our drama club, that I used to visit on weekends. Since my participation in various activities organizing by the club, I achieved a lot.
These activities bring me a lot of funs, provide me with good opportunities to develop new friendships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook. With so much advantages shown above, why not to join us at once?
【答案】; Ladies and gentlemen,
It's my honor to give a speech here. After-class activities play important part in our school life. Proper activities help enrich our lives, broaden our horizons develop our personalities.
own experience can serve as a case in point. When I was in Senior One, I a member of our drama club, I used to visit on weekends. Since my participation in various activities by the club, I achieved a lot.
These activities bring me a lot of , provide me with good opportunities to develop new friendships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook. With so advantages shown above, why not join us at once?
【解析】本文是一篇议论文,论述了课外活动的作用。
①考查冠词。 important的发音开头是元音,故要用不定冠词an。因此a改为an 。
②考查连词。 句意:适当的活动有助于丰富我们的生活,拓宽我们的视野,并且可以培养我们的性格。enrich our lives,broaden our horizons和develop our personalities是并列关系,故要将or改为and。
③考查代词。 mine是名词性物主代词,相当于"my+名词"。该处后面有名词experience,故要将Mine改为My。
④考查时态。 该句的时间状语为"When I was in Senior One",是过去的时间,故主句要用一般过去时态,故应将become改为became。
⑤考查定语从句。 分析句子结构可知,"which I used to visit on weekends"是非限制性定语从句,修饰our drama club,引导词在从句中作visit的宾语,故要用关系代词which引导从句。that不能引导非限制性定语从句,因此that改为which。
⑥考查非谓语动词。"organized by the club"是定语从句,修饰various activities,various activities和organize之间是被动关系,故要用过去分词作定语。因此organizing改为organized。
⑦考查时态。 该句的时间状语为"Since my participation in various activities",since引出时间状语,主句用现在完成时态,故要在I后加have。
⑧考查名词。 fun是不可数名词,没有复数形式,故要将funs改为fun。
⑨考查形容词。 much修饰不可数名词,many修饰可数名词复数。advantages是复数名词,故要将much改为many。
⑩考查固定句式。 why not do sth.意为"为什么不做……呢?",是固定句式,故to多余,应去掉。