Question

4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．
     2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第II处起）不计分．
One cold evening during the holiday season，a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window． The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags． A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes． She took the child by the hand and led him into the store． There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing．They came back outside into the street，so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday． The little boy looked  her and asked how she was God． She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child．

Answer 1

分析 假日一个寒冷的夜晚，一个大约六七岁的小男孩站在商场的橱窗前，没穿鞋子，衣服破破烂烂．经过的一位女士看到了孩子苍白的蓝眼睛中的渴望．她带着小男孩加入商场，给他买了新鞋子和温暖的衣服．出了商场，这位女士让小男孩回家，小男孩看着她，问她是否是上帝，女士笑着说她只是上帝的一个孩子．

解答 One cold evening during the holiday season，a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window．
                                                                                                                                          去掉  
The little child hasno shoes and his clothes were just rags．
                      had
A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes．
                        passing 
She took the child by the hand and led him into the store． There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing．
                                                                                                                 him                                                         warm
They came back outside into the street，so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday． 
                                                           and                                         go                                       
The little boy looked∧her and asked how she was God．
                              加at                  if/whether
She smiled and replied that she was just one of his child．
                                                                         children
1．the去掉．短语搭配，in the front of是指内部的前部，in front of 是外部的前面．
2．has改为had．文章讲述的是过去的故事，要用一般过去时态．
3．passes改为passing．题干中pass by是作woman的后置定语，要用非谓语动词形式．两者构成主动关系，要用现在分词．
4．her改为him．逻辑指代错误，句意指代的是小男孩，要用him来指代．
5．warmly改为warm．题干中是修饰名词clothing，要用形容词．
6．so改为and．句意表达的是承接的动作，不是结果．
7．come改为go．逻辑错误，句意表达的是让小男孩回家去，不是到家来．
8．加at．题干中look是不及物动词，后接宾语时，要加介词．
9．how改为if/whether．题干中she was God是作asked的宾语从句，句意表达的是小男孩问她是不是上帝，不是表达程度．
10．child改为children．题干中前面有one of短语，child要用复数．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．