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1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Sir/Madam，
Very glad to know that our school broadcasting station needs a new member this term．I'm writing to apply to the position．
I am Li Hua，the boy from Senior One．I have ever been a broadcaster before and in Junior Three I have gained the first prize in the contest of Putonghua of our grade．My friends around always tell me my voice sounds beautifully．Of course，I know become a broadcaster calls for extra devotion and more times after school is necessary for a better performance．Perhaps，my school life will be busier with such a task every day，so I'd like to develop me and obtain more knowledge after class to make my new school life more colorful．
I'm eager for your reply and I'll be more than happy until you can consider my application．Please make contact me by telephone at 5103123or email at Lihua l01@hotmail．com．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

分析 本段文字是作者应征学校广播室里广播员的一封求职信，作者在信中介绍了自己的经历和在普通话方面取得的成绩，充分说明自己很适合这个职位，作者愿意而且也有信心把这个工作做好．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
       Very glad to know that our school broadcasting station needs a new member this term．I'm writing to apply to the position．
                                                                                                                                                                     for
       I am Li Hua，the boy from Senior One．I have ever been a broadcaster before and in Junior Three I have gained the first prize in the contest of Putonghua
                            a                                                                                                                       去掉have                 
of our grade．My friends around always tell me my voice sounds beautifully．Of course，I know become a broadcaster calls for extra devotion and more times
                                                                                                 beautiful                        becoming 或to become                                                          time
after school is necessary for a better performance．Perhaps，my school life will be busier with such a task every day，so I'd like to develop me and obtain
                                                                                                                                                                            but                             myself
 more knowledge after class to make my new school life more colorful．
      I'm eager for your reply and I'll be more than happy until you can consider my application．Please make contact∧me by telephone at 5103123or email at 
                                                                                   if                                                                                  with
Lihual01@hotmail．com．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

1．to改为for；考查介词，apply fo是固定搭配，意为"申请"．
2．the改为a；考查冠词，这里a boy from…和前面是同位语，不用特指，所以用不定冠词a．
3．去掉have；考查时态，根据意思"三年级取得普通话比赛第一名的好成绩"可以推测该句要用一般过去时．所以去掉have．
4．beautifully改为beautiful，考查形容词的用法，句子中的sound这里用作系动词，后跟形容词作表语．
5．become改为becoming或 to become；考查非谓语动词，动名词或动词不定式可以在句子中作主语，所以这里可改becoming为或to become．
6．times改为time；考查名词词义；time作为时间将是不可数名词，作为可数名词时意为"次数"，这里的time应当作"时间"，所以不可数．
7．so改为but；考查连词，根据句意，这里用but表示转折．
8．me改为myself；考查人称代词，根据句意用反身代词表示"自我发展"．
9．until改为if；考查连词，根据句意，这里用if引导一个条件状语从句．
10．contact后面加with；考查动词，contact是不及物动词，后面跟宾语是要加介词with．

点评 1，通读全文，了解基本大意，确定基本时态；2，分析句群间的结构关系；3，运用词汇，语法，习惯性短语等基本语言知识，快速找出文中错误并加以修改．

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．
     2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第II处起）不计分．
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D．make a joke
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C．shake your head                       
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B．there are many true emergencies in life
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B．Amazed； Nervous； Relieved
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B．He learned powerful lessons from it．
C．The scene left a great impression on him．
D．The couple crossed the street without assistance．
67．By saying"Remember to stop and smell the roses"，the author intends toD．
A．indicate he is busy                   
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B．All the cars stopped one after another．
C．The cars stopped at the same time．
D．The cars gathered from different directions．
69．From the story，we can draw a conclusion that．A
A．joint efforts do make a difference     
B．good manners never go out of fashion
C．drivers observe the social order strictly 
D．the blind live a happy life despite difficulties
70．What is the author's purpose of writing this passage？D
A．To call on people to give a hand when necessary．
B．To tell a story about the blind man crossing crossroads．
C．To remind drivers to drive slowly for their own safety．
D．To persuade people to enjoy a wonderful moment in life．
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  In ages past，there were no human rights．Then the idea turned up that people should have certain freedoms．And that idea，following World War II，resulted finally in the document called the Universal Declaration of Human Rights and the thirty rights to which all people are entitled． 

（Note：Answer the questions or complete the statements in No more than 10 words）
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80．How long have human rights officially existed？（For） 70 years
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A．should have dressed upB．can't have dressed up
C．must have dressed upD．needn't have dressed up
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