题目内容
4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
In recently years,the sandstorm has occurred a lot of times,doing great harm to our daily life.Some people would rather to stay at home for fear of the dirty air caused by the sandstorm.Diseases relate to sandstorm get more and more people to hospital.What's worse,many flights have to put off.
It's an urgent task for us to take actions to stop sandstorms from happen.All citizens should raise our awareness of protecting the environment.We should plant more trees and don't cut them down or dig up grass,where can contribute for land protection.Only in this way can we had a bluer sky and a better world to live in.
分析 本文主要讲述沙尘暴对我们造成的危害.沙尘暴使空气变脏,让人们生病,航班延误等.我们应当采取行动来阻止沙尘暴,比如,多种树,不要挖草场等.
解答 In recently years,the sandstorm has occurred a lot of times,doing great harm to our daily life.Some people would rather to stay at home for fear of the dirty air caused by the sandstorm.Diseases relate to sandstorm get more and more people to hospital.What's worse,many flights have to∧put off.
It's an urgent task for us to take actions to stop sandstorms from happen.All citizens should raise our awareness of protecting the environment.We should plant more trees and don't cut them down or dig up grass,where can contribute for land protection.Only in this way can we had a bluer sky and a better world to live in.
详解:
1.recently改为recent 考查形容词.years是名词,要用形容词修饰.
2.去掉to 考查词语用法.would rather意为"宁可; 宁愿",后接动词原形.
3.relate改为related 考查过去分词.be related to意为"与…有关",用过去分词短语related to sandstorm作后置定语.
4.加be 考查动词语态.many flights与put off之间是动宾关系,要用被动语态,加be构成被动语态.
5.actions改为action 考查固定搭配.take action意为"采取行动",是固定搭配.
6.happen改为happening 考查动名词.from是介词,后接动词时用动名词形式.
7.our改为their 考查代词.their指代All citizens.
8.where改为which 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词是前面整个句子,在从句中作主语,用关系代词which.
9.for改为to 考查介词.contribute to意为"有助于",是固定搭配.
10.had改为have 考查倒装句.Only in this way属于"only+介词短语"结构,放在句首时,句子要倒装,can后接动词原形.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
It takes consistent time and effort to be an expert in any area.People usually get discouraged when it takes more time than they thought it would.At this time,people refer only to people who have already achieved what they want to do.Look at any successful person and you'll notice one thing common in all of them:they took time to learn and mastered their skill like no one else.There is no elevator to success; you have to take the stairs.
You don't have to live your life in a way society wants you to.Many old beliefs are being performed these days and are followed blindly.Parents sometimes force their children to select a career they don't want because other children have selected that career.Worst of all,people follow them without even asking.There is no harm in believing in old beliefs but when you pursue them before your interest,sooner or later you'll realize that you should first do what you think is right.
We don't care about the things we get easily.Take health for example.Very few people take their health seriously.They know that if their health is lost,they won't be happy,but they still eat junk food and never exercise.Why?Because they don't take their health seriously and the real reason behind that is they have got it for free.We spend thousands on cars and take care of them nicely.Imagine what would have been the price of human body if we had to pay for it?
Be brave to take the road less traveled.In our whole life,we always want to follow the same path that everyone suggests,do the same thing everyone does,take the same career path everyone takes,wear the same clothes everyone wears,and hang out with the same people we work with.Why?Because we are scared to fail.But when you get bored of life,you realize that you are not meant to do what everyone does and that your destiny is different than anyone else's out there in the world.But the price we pay to realize this is high because it takes a great amount of courage to follow your own trail by listening to your heart.
Break the rules sometimes.We follow rules so that things are in order and no one is disturbed unnecessarily.This is true in case of traffic and other company rules but when it comes to your life,there are rules made by people who are scared to do something apart from their routine and therefore they made rules to prevent others doing so.But when time passes by and you think you are not being directed towards your goal and these so-called rules are your biggest obstacles,BREAK THEM.Sometimes,we need to be bold and act courageously.
5 life lessons you will learn the hard way | |
Be (71)patient to achieve success | ●Time-consuming tasks often bring (72)discouragement to people. ●What successful people have in (73)commonis that they took time to learn and mastered their skill. |
Live your own life | ●Old beliefs have their value,but their being followed (74)blindlysometimes may make people suffer. ●It is not a good idea to abandon what you are (75)interestedin for old beliefs. |
Never ignore the things we get easily | Most people don't (76)treasure/value/cherishwhat they get for nothing,li ke health. |
Take the road by listening to your heart | ●People are usually trying to be like someone else because they are afraid of (77)failure/failing. ●You need to be (78)courageous/braveto listen to your heart before you pay a high price. |
Break the rules sometimes | ●People tend follow rules so that they can (79)avoidmaking things out of order. ●When rules become (80)obstacles/barriersto your goal,you should break them boldly and courageously. |