Question

16．请你为《21^st Century》写一篇报道，介绍我校为高三学生创立的"心灵城堡（Soul Castle）"专栏（column），并谈谈自己的感想．
内容要点包括：
1．开设目的：缓解压力，确保健康      2．专栏优势：专业指导
3．专栏内容：建议，心声             4．你的感想
注意：
1．词数120左右
2．开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）
Our school has set up a column called"Soul Castle"for senior 3students．It is aimed at relieving pressure，and ensure the health of students．The column has the unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us the expertise and guidance．（高分句型一）It covers the thoughts and feelings of students and the professional suggestions．
From my point of view，not only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list．（高分句型二）It also provides a platform to communicate with our teachers and parents．Moreover，we can get help and guidance from professionals to solve our mental problems．With its help，we can take the College Entrance Examination with confidence．
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Answer 1

分析 本次作文要求为《21st Century》写一篇报道，介绍我校为高三学生创立的"心灵城堡（Soul Castle）"专栏（column），并谈谈自己的感想．要点包括：1．开设目的：缓解压力，确保健康 2．专栏优势：专业指导3．专栏内容：建议，心声 4．你的感想．故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求．
写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯．其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力．例如：定语从句that the experts in psychology can give us the expertise and guidance．倒装句not only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list．不定式的to communicate with，to solve our mental problems．的用法．aimed at，unique advantage，expertise and guidance，attach等词汇及From my point of view，not only…but also，Moreover，With its help等连接词．
The column has the unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us the expertise and guidance．（高分句型一）
 From my point of view，not only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list．（高分句型二）

解答       Our school has set up a column called"Soul Castle"for senior 3 students．It is aimed at relieving pressure，and ensure the health of students．The column has the unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us the expertise and guidance．（高分句型一）It covers the thoughts and feelings of students and the professional suggestions．
      From my point of view，not only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list．（高分句型二）It also provides a platform to communicate with our teachers and parents．Moreover，we can get help and guidance from professionals to solve our mental problems．With its help，we can take the College Entrance Examination with confidence．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．