题目内容
【题目】假如你叫杨阳, 你的朋友夏雨来信询问你暑假过的怎样。请根据下列信息给他回信, 说明你在暑假中的活动和理由。1. 休息, 因为感觉累、学习压力大, 缺少锻炼和睡眠;2. 看望农村的祖父母, 帮助他们做了些家务, 并给他们谈了一些身边的事;3. 和朋友进行短途旅游, 欣赏大自然, 呼吸新鲜空气。注意:字数100左右,开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Xia Yu,
I'm very glad to receive your letter. And it's a pleasure to……
Best wishes!
Yours,
Yang Yang
【答案】Dear Xiayu,
I'm very glad to receive your letter. And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent my summer holiday.
First, I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise. Of course, it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends. What's more, I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air. What did you do in your summer holidays? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Yangyang
【解析】本文是提纲类作文, 要点已给出;考生可结合自身实际把文章内容写的具体、鲜活并且要有说服力。成文时要注意:
1.文章主要用第一人称;
2.时态:灵活变换;
3.文章的内容要点要齐全:(1). 休息, 因为感觉累、学习压力大, 缺少锻炼和睡眠;(2). 看望农村的祖父母, 帮助他们做了些家务, 并给他们谈了一些身边的事;(3). 和朋友进行短途旅游, 欣赏大自然, 呼吸新鲜空气;(4).注意使用高级词汇和高级句型, 以提高文章的档次;(5).注意使用一些连接词, 使得文章表达自然、流畅。(6).注意文章的字数控制, 100单词左右。