Question

【题目】假设你是李华，学校邀请著名书法家沈鹏到校举行书法讲座。请你给外教David写封邮件邀请他参加。

内容要点：

1.讲座时间：5月15日（星期日）上午8:00---11:00；

2.讲座地点：艺术楼演讲大厅；

3.活动安排：听讲座，讨论及提问题，观摩名家即兴创作等；

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.calligraphy 书法；improvise即兴表演

Dear David,

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

I’m writing to invite you to the lecture on Chinese calligraphy which is the art of writing Chinese characters and especially refers to the rules of writing with a brush.

The lecture will be given by Shen Peng, a famous calligrapher, in the lecture hall of the Art Building on May 15th this Sunday. As far as I know, you like the traditional culture of China, so you will enjoy it.

The lecture will last from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m., mainly consisting of three parts: one and a half hours’ listening to the lecture, half an hour’s discussion and one hour for observing the calligrapher improvising on the spot.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；学校邀请著名书法家沈鹏到校举行书法讲座，你给外教David写封邮件邀请他参加，告诉他：1.讲座时间：5月15日（星期日）上午8:00---11:00；2.讲座地点：艺术楼演讲大厅；3.活动安排：听讲座，讨论及提问题，观摩名家即兴创作等。时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：the lecture on Chinese calligraphy（书法讲座），Chinese characters（汉字），write with a brush（用毛笔写字），a famous calligrapher（著名书法家），the lecture hall of the Art Building（艺术楼演讲大厅），observe（观摩），improvise（即兴创作）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句I’m writing to invite you to the lecture on Chinese calligraphy which is the art of writing Chinese characters and especially refers to the rules of writing with a brush.；同位语The lecture will be given by Shen Peng, a famous calligrapher, in the lecture hall of the Art Building on May 15th this Sunday.；非谓语动词The lecture will last from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m., mainly consisting of three parts: one and a half hours’ listening to the lecture, half an hour’s discussion and one hour for observing the calligrapher improvising on the spot. 文章简短干练，全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。