Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校元旦前举办了一次新年联欢晚会，请你给你的英国笔友David写一封邮件，向他介绍此次活动的情况。要点如下：

1. 活动目的；

2. 活动时间、地点、方式；

3. 你的感受。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

How are you recently? I miss you very much. I am writing to share with you an unforgettable experience.

Our school held a party to welcome the new year of 2018 in our school hall on the last day of the year 2017. All the teachers and students attended the party, and some of them gave some wonderful performances. We danced and sang along to the songs. Although it was cold outside, we felt warm in the hall. Besides, we raised some money for the poor children in the mountain area. We all enjoyed ourselves.

Write back to me and best wishes for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封电子邮件。你校元旦前举办了一次新年联欢晚会，请你给你的英国笔友David写一封邮件，向他介绍此次活动的情况。要点如下：活动目的； 活动时间、地点、方式；你的感受。写作时要认真阅读前面的提示，根据所给要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封电子邮件。内容齐全，要点突出，语句精炼，文中使用高级句子。All the teachers and students attended the party, and some of them gave some wonderful performances.句中使用and连接简单句，变成并列句；Although it was cold outside, we felt warm in the hall.句中Although引导让步状语从句；Besides, we raised some money for the poor children in the mountain area.句中Besides,的运用显得文章层次分明。