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1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
When young，I looked forward to my birthday all year．My friends and family made me feel like the most special person in world．The night before my birthday，my parents moved careful into my bedroom while I was sleeping．They hang balloons on my walls．When I woke up，I was always surprising!
Although my birthday was on a school day，I brought in treats to share with my teachers and classmates．While I was having my party at our house，my parents were made up lots of fun game to play．When I got old，my parents let my friends and I stay up all night watching movies and chatting．
The saddest day of the year for me was the day before my birthday，meaning  I had to wait another whole year before it came again．

分析 文章大意：本文主要讲述了作者小时候过生日的回忆．父母会悄悄送礼物，给我一个惊喜，我也经常把礼物带到学校和老师同学分享．对我来说最悲伤的一天是生日后的一天，因为那意味着我还要等一年，下一个生日才能到来．

解答 When young，I looked forward to my birthday all year．My friends and family

made me feel like the most special person in∧world．The night before my birthday，
                                                                  the
my parents moved careful into my bedroom while I was sleeping．They hang balloons on my walls．
                           carefully                                                                hung
When I woke up，I was always surprising!
                                               surprised
    Although my birthday was on a school day，I brought in treats to share with my teachers and classmates．While I was having my party at our house，my parents
     If
were  made up lots of fun game to play．When I got old，my parents let my friends and I stay up all night watching movies and chatting．
                                      games                              older                                            me
    The saddest day of the year for me was the day before my birthday，meaning  I had to wait another whole year before it came again．
                                                                          after

1．在in world之间加the．考查冠词．在这个世界上，应该用in the world．
2．careful-carefully．考查副词．修饰动词moved 应该用副词
3．hang-hung．考查时态．从上下文可知，本文回忆过去的事情，所以这里应该用一般过去时．
4．surprising-surprised．考查形容词的适当形式．主语是I，所以表语应该用surprised．
5．Although-If考查连词．句意为：如果我的生日是在上学期间，我就会把礼物带到学校和老师和同学分享．
6．去掉made up前面的were．考查语态．本句中是主动语态，意思是我的父母会编很多游戏，所以去掉be动词．
7．game-games．考查名词单复数．前面有a  lot of 修饰，game是可数名词，所以应该用复数形式．
8．old-older．考查形容词的适当形式．当我年龄再大一点，所以应该用形容词的比较级．
9．I-me．考查人称代词．此处做let的宾语，所以应该用宾格．
10．before-after．考查介词搭配．根据句意应该是在生日后盼望下一个生日，所以用after．

点评 改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分．
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  To forgive is a virtue，but no one has ever said it is easy．When someone has deeply hurt you，it can be extremely difficult to let go of your hate．However，forgiveness is possible，and it can be surprisingly beneficial to your physical and mental health．People who forgive show less sadness，anger and stress and more hopefulness，according to a recent research．
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