题目内容
【题目】圣诞将至,英语俱乐部成员计划举办晚会。假如你是李华,给外教Andrew写封邮件,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.地点:餐厅二楼;
2.时间:12月24号7点开始,9点结束;
3.邀请外教致辞;
4.晚会活动方式。
注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Andrew,
I'd like to invite you to join us in the coming Christmas party, which will be held on the second floor of the dining hall on December 24.
The party begins at 7:00 pm. and ends at 9:00 pm. You are welcome to make a short speech. After that, we will spend some fun time together, singing, dancing and playing games. Then you will enjoy a great dinner, tasting a variety of delicious food. Besides, our English club members will exchange gifts. I'm sure it will be a warm get-together.
I'd appreciate it if you could come. We will meet you at the school gate then.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇提纲类书面表达,要求考生把自己当成李华,英语俱乐部成员计划举办晚会,请给外教Andrew写封邮件,邀请他参加。
第1步:审题。根据提示可知全文是一封电子邮件,要求考生给外教Andrew写封邮件,邀请他参加英语俱乐部晚会。全文以一般将来时和第二三人称为主。
第2步:组织要点。1.地点:餐厅二楼;2.时间:12月24号7点开始,9点结束;3.邀请外教致辞;4.晚会活动方式:交换礼物、品尝美食等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句,关键词为invite…to join us in、make a short speech、spend some fun time together、enjoy a great dinner、a variety of delicious food、exchange gifts等。写作时注意电子邮件的格式和惯用语。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。