Question

17．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter得知你即将高中毕业，写信询问你毕业感悟．请你用英文给他回信．内容包括：
1．收获与感悟；
2．叙述离别之情；
3．对未来的展望．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头与结语已写好，不计入总词数内．
Dear Peter，
How is everything going？
            ．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给美国朋友Peter写一封信，告知他有关你即将高中毕业的感悟．
写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．
写作要点：1．收获与感悟； 2．叙述离别之情；3．对未来的展望．
重要短语：graduate from…（从…毕业），express one's feelings （表达某人的情感），learned a lot from …（ 从…学到很多），the three precious years（宝贵的三年），attended the high school（上中学…），get along well with （与…相处很好），adapt oneself to…（使某人适应…），in addition to （除…之外还），made good friends （交好朋友），as independent as （与…一样独立），say goodbye to（跟…说再见），be admitted into（被录取），in future（未来），look forward to sth（期望…）．
【高分句型】
1．For example，when I first attended this high school，I didn't know how to get along well with others．
此处是由"when"引导的时间状语从句，主句为"I didn't know how to get along well with others"．
2．I can't imagine what I would be like without them．
此处是由"what"引导的宾语从句，从句中使用陈述句语序．

解答 Dear Peter，
How is everything going？
As you know，I will graduate from high school soon．At this moment，no words can express my complicated feelings．How time flies!I have learned a lot from studying and living in my school for these three precious years．For example，when I first attended this high school，I didn't know how to get along well with others．【高分句型】What's worse，it took me long to adapt myself to the new environment．But now，in addition to the excellent academic performance，I have made lots of good friends and become as independent as an adult．（收获与感悟）
Therefore，I feel terribly sorry to say goodbye to my dear teachers and classmates soon．I can't imagine what I would be like without them．【高分句型】（叙述离别之情）Hopefully，I will be admitted into an ideal university and become stronger and more responsible in future．（对未来的展望）
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．