题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing house)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival),请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:
1.出发及返回时间;
2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 结束语已为你写好。
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.
Looking_forward_to_your_reply.
Yours,
Li_Hua
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:1. 一般将来时为主。2.要点要已经给出:1.出发及返回时间;2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程。3. 注意语气。
【范文亮点】
1.We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中的并列使用动词,以及which引导的非限制性定语从句
2.If you are able to come with us, please let us know. If 引导的条件状语从句。