Question

【题目】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

The canteen was crowded with summer campers from high schools across the city, all extremely hungry after a day's activities. I spotted an empty place and walked there. Just as I put my tray(餐盘) down, I felt a bump against my hip. The tray dropped on the table and the soup spilt all over my camp shirt and jeans. And I heard a burst of laughter.

"Can’t you look where you are going, you clumsy fool!" I shouted, glaring at the troublemaker, a tall boy with wild hair.

"Sorry! Can't help laughing! You look so funny!" said the boy, bending over with laughter. I was too annoyed to respond and just walked away to change my clothes.

The next morning, we were all assembled for roll call(点名), when I saw the same boy come running out of the dorm, his unbuttoned shirt flying behind him. Before he could slide into place, he was spotted by the Camp Commandant. As a punishment for being late, he was made to do a hundred pushups. As I walked past him later, I let out a loud laugh, saying "Sorry. I can't help laughing. You look so funny."

So the war of words continued in the following three days with the wild-haired boy, whose name, I found out, was Ben.

A mountain hike(远足) marked the last day of the camp. On the way back, I found myself left far behind my team. Soon, they were out of sight. The camp site was a long way away and I was getting anxious as evening fell. I risked taking a shortcut(近路) clung to the mountain side, but suddenly, I tripped off the path and slid right down the slope(斜坡).

Fortunately, my fall was stopped by a bunch of bamboo. I saw I was about ten meters below the track. There was no way I could climb up the slope as evidently I had my ankle broken. After making several vain attempts, I waited hopelessly. It got dark and I became afraid.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

Then, I saw a faint light, and heard a voice calling out my name.

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Paragraph 2:

The next day, as we were boarding the buses which would take us back to our own homes, Ben came up to me.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1：

Then, I saw a faint light, and heard a voice calling out my name. I started screaming out loud for help, but my voice sounds so weak down from the slope. Scared and exhausted, I couldn’t help thinking that maybe the campers wouldn't find me and I would die alone in the mountain. Finally, I heard "there he is." I'm saved, thank God! I told them that I had hurt my ankle, and they helped me slowly back to the camp. The next day I was going home for treatment.

Paragraph 2:

The next day, as we were boarding the buses which would take us back to our own homes, Ben came up to me. He said, "this isn’t funny at all. I hope you get better soon." “Thank you, I hope we can be friends from now on.”I said. So the battle between me and the wild-haired boy was over, and Ben and I became good friends.

【解析】

这是一篇读后续写作文。

通过阅读所给文章可知，作者在夏令营时遇到了一个头发蓬乱的高个子男孩Ben，总是说作者滑稽，和作者作对。直到在最后一天作者在登山时不小心滑下山坡，摔断了脚踝。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：然后，我看到微弱的灯光，听到一个声音在叫我的名字。所以后文应该是讲述作者获救的过程；第二段开头是：第二天，当我们准备上车回家时，Ben向我走来。本段应该写作者和Ben最后的结局是成为了朋友，结束了他们之间的“战争”。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。