题目内容
【题目】假如你住在一个涉外小区,社区请你帮忙根据以下提示用英文写一封电子邮件, 将周末社区邀请居民参加乡村耕作活动的细节传达给用户。
活动宗旨 | 亲近自然, 锻炼身体 |
参加人员 | 所有感兴趣的小区居民 |
内容 | 种菜, 养花, 喂鱼等 |
时间 | 本周六上午9:00—12:00(如果天气允许) |
地点 | 距离小区5千米的一家农场 |
出行方式 | 集体骑自行车前往 |
要求:1. 短文结构完整,意思连贯,语言流畅,语法准确,符合逻辑;
2. 100词左右;
3. 参考词汇:居民resident ; 社区 community
Hi,everyone!
【答案】Hi, everyone!
To get close to nature and do more exercise, all residents who are interested in farming are invited to take part in an activity organised by our community. Weather permitting, we’ll ride bicycles to do some farming from 9:00 am to 12:00 am this Saturday on a farm, which is about 5 kilometres away. We can grow some vegetables, plant some flowers, and raise fish in the lake nearby. Not only will you enjoy the pleasure of labour and relax, but also you can taste fresh produce picked by your own hand if you are wiling to.
Everyone is welcome to attend!
【解析】考查提纲类书面表达:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,不拖拉,使用短语get close to靠近;are interested in对。感兴趣;take part in参加 ;Weather permitting, we’ll ride bicycles to do some farming from 9:00 am to 12:00 am this Saturday on a farm, which is about 5 kilometres away.这个句子中Weather permitting,独立主格结构,并且which引导非限制性定语从句。Not only will you enjoy the pleasure of labour and relax, but also you can taste fresh produce picked by your own hand if you are wiling to这个句子用到not only but also分别引导两个句子,not only这个句子用部分倒装 。