题目内容
【题目】短文改错
What I am actually eager to do is being a responsible person. I used to thinking it was so hard to grow up into a responsible member of our society. Besides, it was an accident happening in a snowy morning that changed my attitude . I was on the way to school and was waiting for the green light with my classmate John while a girl was knocked down by passing car. Without hesitation we ran to her and gave her first aid the instant when we saw it . Soon many help was given to him by the people nearby. Because we sent her to the nearest hospital in time, she was able to receive proper treatment . By the time she left the hospital, she has written a letter expressing her gratitude to those giving help. We both felt so proud that from then on we made up our mind to be always kind and responsible men.
【答案】
【1】thinking改为think
【2】besides改为however
【3】in改为on
【4】while改为when
【5】by后加a
【6】删掉when
【7】many改为much
【8】him改为her
【9】has改为had
【10】mind改为minds
【解析】
【1】thinking改为think;考查固定句型,used to do sth过去常常做某事。故为动词原形think。
【2】besides改为however;句意:我过去常常认为成为社会中有责任感的一员很难,然而,发生在一个大雪早晨的车祸改变了我的态度。可知这里有明显的转折关系。故为however。
【3】in改为on;考查固定搭配,on是指一个特指的早上,表具体。
【4】while改为when;考察固定句型,be doing…when,正在做某事,这时突然...。故用when。
【5】by后加a;句意:这时,一个女孩被一辆驰过的汽车撞倒。注意名词前的冠词。
【6】删掉when;the instant是连词,一..就..,其后接句子,无需when。
【7】many改为much;help为不可数名词,故用much。
【8】him改为her;可知被撞倒的是个女孩,被施以急救的也是女孩,因此用her。
【9】has改为had;整片文章叙述的是过去的事情,故用过去式,应用had。
【10】mind改为minds;考察固定短语,open up one’s mind,某人下定决心,由our可知,mind应为复数。