Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换批改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中至多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在下面写出改正后的词。

注意：

1. 每次错误及其修改均仅限一词

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

A young man called low-Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests to living a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】become →became

【2】去掉to

【3】reducing→reduce

【4】she →he

【5】up →down

【6】Therefore→Besides

【7】simply →simple

【8】invention→inventions

【9】加of

【10】去掉but

【解析】

试题分析：一个低碳环保主义者引起了人们的注意，他有很多环保的做法，如：一张纸正反两面都用、看电视时调低屏幕亮度、骑自行车上班等。

【1】become →became 考查时态。根据后面的时态in 2011可知是过去时，用became。

【2】去掉to 考查介词。Suggest doing ;suggest sb to do固定搭配，建议做某事，所以去掉to 。

【3】reducing→reduce 考查动词。Help (to)do帮助做某事，有助于某事，用reduce。

【4】she →he 考查代词。根据A young man可知主人公是男的，故he 。

【5】up →down考查介词和对文章的理解。要环保节约的做法应该是turn down调低，而不是turn up 调高，用down。

【6】Therefore→Besides考查连词。另外的环保做法，是补充说明上文的做法，而不是结果，用Besides。

【7】simply →simple考查形容词。修饰名词life用形容词，用simple 。

【8】invention→inventions 考查单复数。so many提示用复数名词，且invention可数，用inventions。

【9】加of 考查介词。In support of 介词短语，支持，赞成，若直接用support则不用加介词 ，所以加of。

【10】去掉but 考查连词。前文已经有连词although了，后句不应该还用介词，所以去掉but。