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10.假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分.
Millions teenagers live at homes without the Internet.The American government want to do something to change this.It says it was important for teenagers to learn online skills in order to keep up to the modern world.Have the Internet can also help people save money,let them to search for bargains and pay bills online.So they're setting up specially online centers.People don't have the web at home can get online in those centers.As well as saving money,the Internet is now one of the main way that people communicate with each other.The government also believes that people who don't have the Internet can get leaving behind their friends who do.

分析 本文作者主要讲述了美国政府想改变数以百万计的年轻人在家里不能上网的原因以及为此所采取的措施.

解答 Millions∧teenagers live at homes without the Internet.The American government want to 
do something to change this.It says it was important for teenagers to learn online skills in 
order to keep up to the modern world.Have the Internet can also help people save money,
let them to search for bargains and pay bills online.So they're setting up specially online 
centers.People∧don't have the web at home can get online in those centers.As well as 
saving money,the Internet is now one of the main way that people communicate with each 
other.The government also believes that people who don't have the Internet can get leaving 
behind their friends who do.
详解:
1.Millions 后加of   考查固定短语   millions of意为:数以百万计的,许许多多的;故在Millions 后加of.  
2.want改为wants    考查主谓一致    由于主语The American government是单数形式,故用wants.
3.was改为is    考查时态    根据上下文都使用了一般现在时可知,此处介绍的是美国政府现在的看法;故用is.
4.to改为with    考查固定短语    keep up with意为:跟上,不落在…后面;故用with.
5.Have改为Having    考查动名词    此处在句中作主语,表示抽象动作,故用Having.
6.去掉them后面的to    考查固定短语    let sb.do sth.意为:让某人做某事;故去掉them后面的to.   
7.specially改为special   考查形容词   此处用来修饰名词centers,故用形容词special.
8.People 后加who   考查关系代词     本句为定语从句;由于先行词People指人,并且在该从句中作主语,故用关系代词who.
9.way改为ways    考查名词的单复数     此处指的是:许多主要的方式(之一),故用复数名词ways.
10.leaving改为left     考查固定短语    get left 意为:被遗弃;被击败;故用left.

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.

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