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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．Dear Brown，
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children．I have told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it．How about join us？The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river．It is such beautiful a place!We can hear birds singing happy all around．Everybody sleeps in tents，that is very exciting．We usually work only five hours a day，so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have fun．I am sure it will be a unforgettable experience．If you have interests in it，write to me soon．
Yours，
Mary．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述作者兼职工作在一个国际营地．向对方推荐一个工作，希望对方加入营地工作．作者的营地在靠近河边的一个小山脚下，能四处听到鸟鸣，每个人都睡在帐篷里，这是很兴奋的．每天工作五小时，有足够的时间参观这个地区．

解答 Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children．I have∧told one more worker will be neededin this year and I think you are fit for it．How about join us？The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river．It is such beautiful a place!We can hear birds singing happy all around．Everybody sleeps in tents，that is very exciting．We usually work only five hours a day，so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have fun．I am sure it will be a unforgettable experience．If you have interests in it，write to me soon．
Yours，
Mary．详解：
1．take改为took 考查动词时态．根据时间状语Last summer，要用一般过去时态．
2．加been 考查动词时态．I与tell之间是动宾关系，用现在完成时的被动语态．
3．去掉in 考查词语用法．this year在句中作时间状语时基前不加介词in．
4．join改为joining 考查动名词．about是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
5．closed改为close 考查固定搭配．close to意为"离…近"，是固定搭配．
6．such改为so 考查词语用法．此处是"so+形容词+（a/an）+单数可数名词"结构．
7．happy改为happily 考查副词．sing是动词，要用副词修饰．
8．that改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词是前面整个句子，在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．
9．a改为an 考查冠词．此处experience意为"经历"，是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指，因unforgettable读音以发元音开头，用不定冠词an．
10．interests改为interest 考查名词．表示"趣味，引起注意之性质"，是不可数名词，没有复数形式．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．