Question

16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My cousin Tom did very well in the midterm exam．My aunt became very happily when she knew it．Tom was looking forward to have a cellphone．However，she bought Tom a cellphone to reward for him．She was really happy when he got the phones．He started playing games using the phone at school．He even played games on class．Sometimes he even plays games till midnight．As a result，he often fell asleep during the class．So it wasn't surprised that he did poorly in the final exam．My aunt regretted giving Tom the cellphone and took away．

Answer 1

分析 我的表弟Tom期中考试成绩很好，姑姑很高兴．因为他一直期盼有一个手机，所以姑姑买了一个手机奖励他．当 Tom 得到手机的时候很高兴，他开始在学校使用手机，甚至在课堂上玩手机．有时玩手机到深夜．结果他在课堂上经常睡觉．所以期末考试他考的很差并不令人吃惊．姑姑很后悔，把手机拿走了．

解答 My cousin Tom did very well in the midterm exam．My aunt became very happily when she knew it．Tom was looking forward to havea cellphone．However，she bought Tom a cellphone to reward for him．She was really happy when he got the phones．He started playing games using the phone at school．He even played games on class．Sometimes he even plays games till midnight．As a result，he often fell asleep during the class．So it wasn't surprised that he did poorly in the final exam．My aunt regretted giving Tom the cellphone and took∧away．
解析：
1．happy-happily．考查形容词和副词的区别．在系动词became 后做表语用形容词happy．表示"姑姑很高兴．"
2．have-having．考查非谓语动词．looking forward to中的to 是介词，所以用doing做宾语，因此用having表示"他期盼有一个手机"．
3．however-therefore．考查连词．根据Tom was looking forward tohavea cellphone（他期盼有一个手机）和she bought Tom a cellphone to reward for him（姑姑买了一个手机奖励他）．两句的含义可知它们之间是因果关系，所以用therefore．
4．She-he．考查代词．根据上下文可知本句表示"当 Tom 得到手机的时候很高兴．"所以用he代指男孩Tom．
5．phones-phone．考查名词．本处指姑姑为Tom买的那一部手机，所以用单数phone．
6．on-in．考查介词．in class是固定短语，表示"在课堂上"．
7．plays-played．考查动词的时态．根据上文可知这是讲述过去的事，所以谓语动词用过去式played．
8．去掉the．考查冠词．和in class一样，class表示"课堂"时不用冠词，所以去掉the．
9．surprised-．surprising．考查同根词的不同．形容词做表语表示"这件事不是令人吃惊的"用surprising．surprised表示"吃惊的"，修饰人．
10．took∧away之间加it．考查代词．took∧away之间加it代指the cellphone．

点评 考查短文改错．
在解答这样的题中要注意词意，词性，句型结构以及一些固定搭配的用法，结合上下文确定句子之间的关系，以便找出文中错误所在．