Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国笔友John得知武汉因为新冠病毒引起的肺炎封城，学校不能如期开学，想知道你们现在在家如何学习。请你写一封回信。内容包括：

1.学习内容和方式；

2.锻炼方式；

3.感想。

参考词汇：the novel coronavirus新型冠状病毒；pneumonia肺炎 lockdown n.封城；quarantine v.隔离

要求：1.词数100左右:

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear John,

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Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

Thank you for caring. As we all know, Wuhan is the most dangerous city, because Wuhan has the largest number of people suffering from the novel coronavirus, and the whole city has been closed by lockdown. However, I am well in spite of feeling scared at times.

Although I do not know when the school begins, I have started my lessons organized by our teachers through the Internet, including all the curricula. It is so wonderful that I am fond of the new style. Besides, I keep the balance both mentally and physically, such as playing badminton, playing chess , dancing with my grandmother .

We are quarantining ourselves at home now, but the cold winter is about to pass, and spring will come as promised .When the spring flowers bloom, we can go to the streets without masks ,with flowers .Come on, Wuhan! Come on, China!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，你的美国笔友John得知武汉因为新冠病毒引起的肺炎封城，学校不能如期开学，想知道你们现在在家如何学习。请你写一封回信。内容包括: 1.学习内容和方式；2.锻炼方式； 3.感想。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，表示感谢，并说明自己的状况。第二段，学习内容和方式；锻炼方式；第三段，感想。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: bloom, curricula, suffering from, lockdown, in spite of ,both mentally and physically, quarantine ourselves, be about to do .

第四步：确定较为高级的句子: although 引导的让步状语从句Although I do not know when the school begins, I have started my lessons organized by our teachers through the internet, including all the curricula. 以及so...that 引导的结果状语从句It is so wonderful that I like the new style .

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:However，Besides，Finally.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。