Question

16．假设你是李华，在某英文网站上，你看到正在开展关于填报志愿时首先考虑专业还是大学的讨论．请根据下面所给的要点提示，用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其描述普遍存在的两种观点及其原因，并谈谈你自己的看法．

要求：
1．包括所有要点，可适度发挥，以使行文连贯；
2．开头已经写好，但不计入总词数；
3．词数100左右．
Dear editor，
Thank you for reading my email．
Every student will be faced with the question when he passes the college entrance examinations：Should I choose a good major or a good university first？（高分句型一）Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested in．It will also make it possible for thereto take their favourite job in future．Those who think differently believe that the environment is important to one's development and that graduates from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job．（高分句型二）
In my opinion，the best choice is a good major at a good university．If we cannot obtain both，the first thing to consider is a good major，because no matter where we study，we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best．（高分句型三）
Best wishes!
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作．注意文章文体、人称和时态．根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如be faced with，prefer to，try our best．还运用了so that，because，if引导的状语从句等等．并注意了句子的衔接如：In my opinion等等．
 Every student will be faced with the question when he passes the college entrance examinations：Should I choose a good major or a good university first？（高分句型一）
Those who think differently believe that the environment is important to one's development and that graduates from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job．（高分句型二）
If we cannot obtain both，the first thing to consider is a good major，because no matter where we study，we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear editor，
       Thank you for reading my email．  Every student will be faced with the question when he passes the college entrance examinations：Should I choose a good major or a good university first？（高分句型一）Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested in．It will also make it possible for thereto take their favourite job in future．Those who think differently believe that the environment is important to one's development and that graduates from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job．（高分句型二）
      In my opinion，the best choice is a good major at a good university．If we cannot obtain both，the first thing to consider is a good major，because no matter where we study，we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best．（高分句型三）
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours truly，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．