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15．我们能活在这美好、精彩的世界上，是因为有父母，老师，朋友．因此在每个人的生命之中应怀有一颗感恩之心，学会感恩他人． 请从以下几点展开写一篇题目为Learn to Be Grateful 的文章．
1．感恩父母，因为父母给了我们全部的爱；
2．感恩老师，因为老师传授了我们知识；
3．感恩朋友，因为朋友给我们带来欢乐；
4．你认为，我们应该为他们做些什么．
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Learn to Be Grateful
Whenever and wherever we are，we should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world．

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分析 这是一篇议论文，从对父母老师朋友三个方面的感激展开．考生在写作时要注意思路清晰及条理清楚．题目已给定大致的观点，要注意汉译英的正确性以及不要遗漏观点，特别注意不要逐条翻译．文章开篇一句Whenever and wherever we are，we should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world．开篇即用了whenever wherever引导的让步状语从句，让人眼前一亮，考生扎实的语言功底可见一斑．be grateful to对…感激．第二段第一句First of all，I would like to express my thanks to my parents who give endless love to me．express my thanks 表达我的感激之情；who give their endless love to me，定语从句修饰parents，再次展现了句式调用能力．express，endless，都属于高级词汇．第段第二句As we know，parents do all they can to make their children's life better and better，do all one can固定句式，此处应用准确，恰当；better and better，越来越好；整个句子紧凑凝练．第二段第四句，why I admire them is that they teach us  not only knowledge but also skills．处处是经典，首先why引导的主语从句为亮点，此外，that 引导的宾语从句加上not only，but also准确地把对老师的感谢分为两个层次，知识和技能；层次清晰．第二段第五句，share happiness and sorrow with me，与我分享快乐与悲伤，从固定搭配运用，到精准地描述朋友的特点都是非常精妙，学会多用．第二段最后一句，Because of you．my life is filled with laughter and sunshine．这样的句子，已经接近诗意般的美感了．第三段第一句，They are so important  in my life that we should learn to be grateful to them点名文章主旨．最后一句，we should work hard and live happily，which is a good pay for them，洋溢着正能量．总结：基本格式为first of all，secondly，finally．

解答 Learn to Be Grateful
Whenever and wherever we are，we should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world．
First of all，I would like to express thanks to my parents who give their endless love to me．（高分句型）As we know，parents do all they can to make their children's life better and better．（高分句型） Secondly，I am grateful to my teachers for their selfless work．Why I admire them is that they teach us not only knowledge but also all kinds of important skills．（高分句型） Finally，I want to thank my fellow friends who share happiness and sorrow with me．Because of you，my life is filled with laughter and sunshine．
They are so important in my life that we should learn to be grateful to them．（高分句型）Try to remember to give our sincere wishes to them now and then．Above all，we should try to work hard and live happily，which is a god pay for them．（高分句型）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．