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【题目】近日,随着《中国足球改革总体方案》的出台,“足球进校园”已成为社会热议的话题。假设你是张涛,你的好友王明想加入校足球队,但是他的父亲认为踢足球会影响学习。请你根据以下提示给王明的父亲写一封信,帮助王明说服他的父亲。
关键词提示:goodfor health; serious about; more confident; encourage him; team effort;communicate… with; make more friends; decide by himself
注意:1.文中应包含所有提供的信息,并进行适当拓展;
2.词数:80—100(给出的文章开头供选择使用,不计入总词数)。
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【答案】Dear Uncle Wang,
I am Zhang Tao, a friend of Wang Fei. I heard that you do not agree Wang Fei to join the school soccer team and think it will have a bad influence on his study. However , I do not think so. Here are my reasons.
Firstly, playing football is good for his heath and health is more important than grades. Secondly, he’s serious about playing soccer. If he is allowed to do what he likes, he will be more confident. It will also encourage him to work hard in study. Last but not least, soccer is about team effort. Joining football team is a chance to communicate more with people and make more friends, which will help him a lot in the future.
Wang Fei has grown up now, can he get a chance to decide by himself ? I’m looking forward to your reply. Thanks so much.
Yours,
Zhang Tao
【解析】试题分析:试题为应用文中的书信写作,试题只给出写作框架,并未给出所有的具体写作细节,为半开放性写作。写好此文,需注意三点:1.是写信格式要准确,信的开头已经给出,但切要写好信的结尾。2.是要详略得当,本文应重点写的是帮助王明说服他的父亲,让他踢足球。3.要注意适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外,在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【亮点说明】
本文是一封书信,格式正确,内容符合要求,怎体布局合理,采用三段式,同时句中使用高级词组和句子。I am Zhang Tao, a friend of Wang Fei.巧妙使用同位语;I do not think so.so替代上文内容;playing football is good for his heath and health is more important than grades.动名词做主语;If he is allowed to do what he likes, he will be more confident.if引导条件状语从句;which will help him a lot in the future.which引导非限制性定语从句;另外,However,Firstly, Last but not least,等的运用为文章增色添彩。
