题目内容

【题目】校广播站正在进行校文明学生的人物介绍。请你写一篇介绍你班 (高一3班)江明(男)同学的广播稿。字数100左右。内容包括1. 良好的性格和行为表现 2. 一件具体事例 3. 对自己的要求和愿望。

Hello, everyone! Today I am to introduce another Civilized Student, whose name is Jiang Ming, from Class Three.

——————————————————————————————————————————————

——————————————————————————————————————————————

——————————————————————————————————————————————

——————————————————————————————————————————————

——————————————————————————————————————————————

——————————————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

【答案】Hello, everyone! Today I am to introduce another Civilized Student, whose name is Jiang Ming, from Class Three. What impresses us is that he always wears a merry smile whenever greeting teachers or classmates. In addition, it is his politeness and great help to others that make him get along well with every classmate. He is always ready to offer help to those who have problems with schoolwork or daily life. Moreover, his optimism and hard work also inspire his classmates.

Last month, I felt terribly depressed due to my bad grades in the monthly examination. He helped me analyze my weaknesses and strengths in all subjects and recommended some useful reference books to me. His encouragement cheered me up and built up my confidence again.

Words fail to describe how helpful and kind he is! He has his own ambition that he wants to be a doctor one day so that he can help more patients in need.

【解析】本文章通过具体事例,采用了多种句式塑造了一个思想品质好,爱助人的个性鲜明,有血有肉的学生形象-江明。本篇文章重点突出,结构完整,语言流畅,条理清晰。

亮点:

(1)在文章中使用了很多复杂句可见驾驭英语的能力非常强。

复杂句1:What impresses us is that he always wears a merry smile whenever greeting teachers or classmates。

这个复杂句中既有what引导的主语从句,又有一个由that引导的表语从句在表语从句中又有一个由whenever状语从句非谓语

What impresses us is that... what引导的主语从句that引导的表语从句是:….is that he always wears a merry smile whenever greeting teachers or classmates;whenever引导的状语从句是he always wears a merry smile whenever greeting teachers or classmates。

复杂句2:He has his own ambition that he wants to be a doctor one day so that he can help more patients in need.其中有一个同位语从句e has his own ambition that he…和一个结果状语从从句…so that he can help more patients in need。

(2)很好地使用了强调句型。it is his politeness and great help to others that make him get along well with every classmate.

(3)使用了几处并列句和复合句

定语从句1:I am to introduce another Civilized Student, whose name is Jiang Ming, from Class Three.

定语从句2:He is always ready to offer help to those who have problems with schoolwork or daily life

(4)感叹句。

Words fail to describe how helpful and kind he is!

(5)非谓语作状语。如:he always wears a merry smile whenever greeting teachers or classmates

(6)使用了许多连接词和许多高级词汇如:In addition, Moreover,get along well with terribly depressed,analyze my weaknesses and strengths等。。使的文章逻辑清晰,结构完整,如流水一般,一气呵成。

总之这是一篇不可多得的上上乘作品,很值得同学们借鉴学习!

练习册系列答案
相关题目

【题目】A new research shows that in Britain more and more people are returning to the old tradition that the whole family has a meal at table. Worrying about the obesity(肥胖症) and breakdown of a family, people change their eating habits so greatly, according to analysis. They find the number of the family having a meal together increases by 5% from 2002 to 2004, and most people who have meals with their family come from the rich social class.

The new discovery makes doctors and the people struggling against obesity extremely excited. Giving up the tradition that the whole family have a meal together is exactly one of the reasons for a series of problems including children’s overweight. If a child has a meal in front of the television or the computer alone, he will often eat some fast food.

Jason Collins is one of the persons returning to the old tradition. Collins is a manager of a bake house. He finds after he gets used to having a meal at home with his child, the child becomes much more obedient(听话的). Dr. Jin is a child psychologist, and she expresses welcome to this result of the study. She says it can make parents have a very good chance to chat with the child when the whole family have a meal together.

1What makes people change their eating habit back to the old tradition in Britain?

A. Worrying about their children

B. Worrying about some social problems

C. Worrying about the living expense

D. Worrying about health and family problems

2How do the people who hope to lose weight feel about the new discovery?

A. They feel glad B. They feel surprised

C. They feel sorry D. They feel disappointed

3Which of the following statements is TRUE according to the passage?

A. The child having dinner with his parents doesn’t like watching TV

B. Children become overweight all because of having dinner alone

C. The family having dinner together is more united and friendly

D. The reason a child has dinner alone is that he likes fast food

【题目】根据短文内容, 从短文后的七个选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

【1】You probably think you will never be a top student. This is not necessarily so. however. Anyone can become a better student if he or she wants to. Here is how

Plan your time carefully. When planning your work, you should make a list of things that you have to do. After making this list. you should make a schedule of your time. First your time for eating, sleeping, dressing, etc. Then decide a good, regular time for studying. 【2】 A weekly schedule may not solve all your problems, but it will force you realize what is happening to your time.

Find a good place to study. Look around the house for a good study area. Keep this space, which may be a desk or simply a corner of your room, free of eeverything but study materials. No games, radios, or television. When you sit down to study, concentrate on the subject.

Make good use of your time in class. 【3】 Listening carefully in class means less work later. Taking notes will help you remember what the teacher says.

Study regularly. When you get home from school, go over your notes, review the important points that your teacher is going to discuss the next day, read that material. 【4】 If you do these things regularly, the material will become more meaningful, and you’ll remember it longer.

Develop a good attitude towards tests. The purpose of a test is to show what you have learned about a subject. They help you remember your new knowledge. The world won’t end if you don’t pass a test,so don, t be over worried.

【5】 You will probably discover many others after you have tried these.

A. There are other methods that might help you with your studying.

B. Don’t forget to set aside enough time for entertainment.

C. Take advantage of class time to listen to everything the teacher says.

D. No one can become a top student unless he or she works hard.

E. Maybe you are an average student.

F. Make full use of class time to take notes of what the teacher says in class.

G. This will help you understand the next class.

违法和不良信息举报电话:027-86699610 举报邮箱:58377363@163.com

精英家教网