题目内容
1.现在养宠物的人越来越多,虽然宠物给人们带来了很多快乐,但同时也引发了不少问题.请写一篇短文,描述一下养宠物的弊端.具体内容包括:1.吵、脏、乱影响环境;
2.带来经济上额外的花费.
3.…
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.标题已为你写好.
Why I Quit Keeping a Pet.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们写一篇短文,描述一下养宠物的弊端,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:现在养宠物的人越来越多,虽然宠物给人们带来了很多快乐,但同时也引发了不少问题,吵、脏、乱影响环境;带来经济上额外的花费.我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为宠物给人们带来了很多快乐.第二部分为养宠物也引发了不少问题,吵、脏、乱影响环境;带来经济上额外的花费.
重点短语与句型:
As is known to all众所周知
keep sb company陪伴某人
the aged老年人
on the other hand另一方面
高分句型一:But,on the other hand,pets act as your family members,who are always demanding.非限制性定语从句
高分句型二:The reasons why I quit keeping a pet are as follows.此句为why 引导的定语从句,可换为for which.
高分句型三:Firstly,the noises,dirt and fur caused by pets are much more annoying and troublesome than I expected此句为过去分词短语caused by pets 作后置定语.
解答 Why I Quit Keeping a Pet
As is known to all,pets keep people company.They are like grandchildren to the aged,and brothers and sisters to the young.But,on the other hand,pets act as your family members,who are always demanding.(宠物给人们带来了很多快乐)
The reasons why I quit keeping a pet are as follows.Firstly,the noises,dirt and fur caused by pets are much more annoying and troublesome than I expected.Keeping pets made me feel like a hardworking,unpaid maid.Secondly,the cost of keeping a pet is surprisingly high,you have to buy endless things for your pet,just as for your kid.(养宠物也引发了不少问题,吵、脏、乱影响环境;带来经济上额外的花费)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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