Question

16．假如你是李华，你打算参加2012年6月份举行的济南市中学生英语演讲比赛，你的演讲主题是环境问题．请根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿：
1．介绍一种你所关注的环境问题；
2．发表你对解决该问题的见解．
注意：1．词数：120-150；
2．可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯．
Dear teachers and schoolmates，
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们就环境问题写一篇演讲稿，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：介绍一种你所关注的环境问题；发表你对解决该问题的见解．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为介绍一种你所关注的环境问题．第二部分为发表你对解决该问题的见解．
重点短语与句型：
large quantities of 大量地
lead to  导致
as a result结果
 take action to  do sth．采取行动做某事
高分句型一：What we are suffering is only a small part of what the nature once suffered．此句为what引导的主语从句和宾语从句
高分句型二：Measures should be taken to protect the environment on which we are relying．此句为定语从句，介词加关系代词
高分句型三：Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along well with it．
                   Only by saving the environment can we save ourselves．此句Only+介词短语，主句部分倒装

解答 Right now I am talking about fighting for respect to our environment．Though the environment doesn't have a mouth to deprecate what humans have done to her，she retaliates through action．In the early years the Chinese cut down large quantities of trees，at the source of the yellow river，which led to the disappearance of big forests and terrible floods．As a result，the Huangtu plateau which was once covered with grass and forests was turned into barrens that supported fewer plants．（介绍一种你所关注的环境问题；）
What we are suffering is only a small part of what the nature once suffered（高分句型一）．If we don't take action to show respect to the environment，we will have to face an increasingly awful situation．Measures should be taken to protect the environment on which we are relying（高分句型二）．First，governments should forbid destroying vegetation，rivers and lakes，oceans  and the atmosphere as well．Second，voices should be made to announce the public of the importance of protecting the environment．Third，enterprises should pay special attention to the effect they have on the environment and work out solutions for the problems．（发表你对解决该问题的见解．）
Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along well with it．Only by saving the environment can we save ourselves（高分句型三）．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．