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2.现在很多学校严禁学生上学带手机,但是仍有许多学生把手机带到学校.请你结合此现象谈谈你的看法,并给校报英语专栏投稿.内容要点如下:
1.简述该现象;
2.谈谈带手机上学的弊端;
3.阐述你的观点.
注意:1.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
In recent years,many schools have taken tough measures to forbid students to bring their mobile phones to school.However,some students break this rule and some students even play with their mobile phones in class,which makes the teacher frustrated.(高分句型一)
The disadvantages of students bringing mobile phones to school are obvious.On the one hand,mobile phones can distract students'attention.On the other hand,some students may get access to some unhealthy websites,which are bad for their development.(高分句型二)Worse still,some students are likely to compare the brands of thei r mobile phones with their classmates'.
In my opinion,I strongly support banning mobile phones in schools.Only in this way can we devote more energies to our study and achieve our goals.(高分句型三).

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息现在很多学校严禁学生上学带手机,但是仍有许多学生把手机带到学校.请你结合此现象谈谈你的看法,并给校报英语专栏投稿,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:简述该现象;谈谈带手机上学的弊端;阐述你的观点.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:take tough measures采取强硬措施;However然而;On the one hand一方面;On the other hand另一方面;Worse still更糟的是;In my opinion以我的观点看
However,some students break this rule and some students even play with their mobile phones in class,which makes the teacher frustrated.(高分句型一)
On the other hand,some students may get access to some unhealthy websites,which are bad for their development.(高分句型二)
Only in this way can we devote more energies to our study and achieve our goals.(高分句型三)

解答 In recent years,many students have taken tough measures to forbid students to bring their mobile phones to school.However,some students break this rule and some students even play with their mobile phones in class,which makes the teacher frustrated.(高分句型一)
      The disadvantages of students bringing mobile phones to school are obvious.On the one hand,mobile phones can distract students'attention.On the other hand,some students may get access to some unhealthy websites,which are bad for their development.(高分句型二)Worse still,some students are likely to compare the brands of thei r mobile phones with their classmates'.
      In my opinion,I strongly support banning mobile phones in schools.Only in this way can we devote more energies to our study and achieve our goals.(高分句型三)

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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