Question

7．地球是我 们每个人的家园，但人类对地球环境的破坏越来越严重．请以How to Protect Our Earth in Our Daily Life 为题，写一篇100词左右的作文．内容应包括：
1．日常生活中人们的不良行为给地球所造成的破坏．
2．保护地球环境的具体建议．

Answer 1

分析 本题要求写一篇保护环境的议论文．要求中已经给出了主要要点，因此要求我们自由发挥的地方较多，只是需要注意不能遗留要求中的要点．动笔前先要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：worse and worse．越来越糟；More and more越来越多；cut down砍伐；Meanwhile同时；
More and more natural disasters are appearing，which keeps us facing a serious threat．（高分句型一）句中使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句
Meanwhile，we should stop factories from pouring waste water into rivers and giving off waste gas into the air．（高分句型二）句中使用了stop…from doing sth阻止…做某事

解答 How to Protect the Environment
      The environment is getting worse and worse．More and more natural disasters are appearing，which keeps us facing a serious threat．（高分句型一） Good environment can make people feel happy and fit．Improving the environment means protecting ourselves．We mustn't cut down trees．Instead，we should plant more trees．Meanwhile，we should stop factories from pouring waste water into rivers and giving off waste gas into the air．（高分句型二）Never litter anywhere．Never spit in public．Don't draw on public walls．It's everyone's duty to protect the environment．

点评 本题难度较大，由于给出信息较少，故解题前需要自己组织整理材料．可先根据要求列出简要提纲，然后在动笔写作，不跑题偏题是做好书面表达的前提条件．