Question

15．Jack，a clerk at the local bank，was wandering alone on the street．It was a cold，silent winter night．His mind was on his wife Linda，who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed，waiting for more money for her operation．Jack had sold everything he had，and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could．But the real world is cruel．A large amount of money was still needed．To Jack，it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help．"I have only one option left，"Jack said to himself．Then he went to the bank，his workplace，again．For several days，he observed the bank and planned a theft．
The next day，he went to work as usual．Everything seemed normal：he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did．But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work，instead of the small one he always carried．At 5：00 pm，the bank closed，and the clerks and the guardshad all gone home．However，at that moment，Jack was in the bathroom，and the guards didn't notice him，of course．When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark，Jack came out from the bathroom．He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase．He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days．Using a special key and some other tools，he then easily opened the doors of the safes．The bank's security system wasn't very good，which allowed Jack to take a lot of money．Several minutes later，Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
Paragraph 1：
After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while，the alarms began to ring．
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Paragraph 2：
But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank，an old man．
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Answer 1

分析 本题特点是"读写结合"，考查考生阅读理解、要点概括、用英语叙事说理等多方面能力．解答此类试题，除了要注意一般写作规范之外，还要准确理解所给文章的中心思想并准确予以解读和概括．
（高分句型一）The police arrived at thebankvery quickly，only to find no one there．句意为：警察很快到达了，结果发现没有人在场．该句型使用了only to do表示意料之外的结果；
（高分句型二）The next day was a really special day for the town，which was filled with newspaper and TV reporters covering the strange theft．
句意为：第二天，对于小镇来说是特别的，到处都是新闻报道这起奇怪的盗窃．which引导一个非限制性定语从句，which指这件事情；
高级词汇：
only to find 结果，；be filled with充满；guilty内疚的；deepen加深；
as soon as possible尽快；even though 即使；

解答 After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while，the alarms began to ring．（高分句型一）The police arrived at thebankvery quickly，only to find no one there．
（高分句型二）The next day was a really special day for the town，which was filled with newspaper and TV reporters covering the strange theft．The clerksat the bank were busy discussing the case，of course，including Jack．The police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible，even though no clues had been found yet．
      （这段描写了Jack内心的煎熬）But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank，an old man．He seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his position．At last，with enough money for her operation，Jack's wife was saved．However，Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank．He could not forget what he had done to the old man．His guilt deepened as time went by．Finally，he turned himself in to the police and accepted his punishment．

点评 这是一篇续写故事的作文．续写故事一定要和原文在内容和时态上连贯一致，所以熟读原文很重要．其他方面和一般的写作时一样的要求，词语运用正确是最主要的要求，也是阅卷老师给分的重点．