Question

【题目】假定你是李华，收到纽约大学录取信(offer)，请你给纽约大学的招生负责人Steven写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示感谢；

2. 咨询需补寄哪些材料；

3. 询问其他准备工作。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Steven,

I am happy to know that I have been admitted to New York University. I’m very grateful for your offer, which I have been dreaming about.

I’m eager to experience my college life. However, I’m at a loss what to prepare now. I wonder if there are materials that I have to post to you. In addition, how do you arrange accommodations for foreign students? How can I apply for a scholarship? With your generous help, I believe I will be better prepared for my college life.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，表达对纽约大学的感谢以及询问相关情况。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表达感谢

2.询问相关情况

1）补寄哪些材料。（materials）

2）其他准备工作。（other preparations）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be admitted to; dream about; be eager to; be at a loss; wonder; accommodations; apply for; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I am happy to know that I have been admitted to New York University.

2. which I have been dreaming about.

3. I’m eager to experience my college life.

4. I’m at a loss what to prepare now.

5. I wonder if there are materials that I have to post to you.

6. how do you arrange accommodations for foreign students?

7. How can I apply for a scholarship?

8. Looking forward to your early reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改