题目内容
20.假如你是李华,现在是一所大学的一名新生.请给你的高中英语教师Alina写一封感谢信,表达对她的爱戴和尊敬.内容要点:1.对Alina的评价;
2.回忆在校时的一件小事;
3.对老师的祝愿.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3.信的开头已为你写好.
Dear Alina,
I'm very excited to write to express my thanks to you.
I am now a freshman of Xiamen University,which I have been dreaming of.Alina,I still remember the days when you taught me English.Your classes are lively and interesting.My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work.
However,at one time,the pressure of examinations,too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed.I was tired of the warning that if didn't do my best,I wouldn't have the chance to go to college.Thanks to your encouragement; if not,I wouldn't have realized my dream.And now I really understand you.I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal college.Are you still too busy?How I miss you!
I'm hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 这是给高中英语教师Alina写一封感谢信.根据题目要求可知用第一人称,用一般过去时态回忆过去,用一般现在时态表达对Alina的评价和对老师的祝愿.
高分句型:
1.I am now a freshman of Xiamen University,which I have been dreaming of.句子里 a freshman 表示"一名新生";which引导非限制性定语从句,代指先行词Xiamen University,做dreaming of的宾语.
我现在是厦门大学的一名新生,这是我一直的梦想.
2.Thanks to your encouragement; if not,I wouldn't have realized my dream.句子里Thanks to 表示"辛亏"; if not是省略句,表示"如果没有你的鼓励";I wouldn't have realized my dream是虚拟语气,表示"跟过去的事实相反".
辛亏有你的鼓励,否则,我不可能实现自己的梦想.
解答 Dear Alina,
I'm very excited to write to express my thanks to you.I am now a freshman of Xiamen University,which I have been dreaming of.【高分句型一】Alina,I still remember the days when you taught me English.Your classes are lively and interesting.My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work.(介绍自己现在的情况,表达对Alina的感谢和评价)
However,at one time,the pressure of examinations,too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed.I was tired of the warning that if didn't do my best,I wouldn't have the chance to go to college.Thanks to your encouragement; if not,I wouldn't have realized my dream.【高分句型二】And now I really understand you.I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal college.Are you still too busy?How I miss you!(回忆在校时的一件小事并且表达对老师的祝愿)
I'm hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 考查提纲类作文.
提纲类英语作文具备以下特点:
1、题材涉及广泛,如人物介绍、地点介绍、新闻报道、生活话题及社会热门话题,试题设计真实性高,符合学生的认知水平,其中学校生活类题材占比例最大.体裁多种多样,包括应用文(书信、日记、通知、发言稿、寻物及招领启事等)、说明文、记叙文、议论文等.
2、提纲类作文提示点一目了然,需要表达的信息一览无余.答题时无须花过多的时间去揣摩写作内容,要点一般不会遗漏.
3、提纲类作文中通常是以不完整的汉语句子(包括术语或概括性的短语)作为提示形式出现.这样既能够让考生获得命题人所要求的信息,又留给考生一定的发挥空间,因而要求考生具备很强的语言驾驭能力和语篇整合能力.
Bike-sharing has taken off in China far faster than in any other market.The market has become flooded with new companies in recent months.The bike-sharing companies operate in a similar way.They use apps that allow users,after paying a deposit,to unlock the wheels with their smartphones.After the journey,users can leave bikes anywhere in public and pay a little money for the use.The service is very popular as it provides an effective solution to"the last kilometer"problem. | The promoting of the bike-sharing service is also raising questions about profitability,wide-spread bike vandalism (破坏) and theft,and growing government regulation.A Hong Kong man who was arrested for throwing several shared bikes into rivers said he had no regret destroying them because"the GPS devices in the bikes give away users'personal information,such as their locations." |
1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2.用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:
(1)支持成反对共享单车的推广;
(2)用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点.
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题.
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇还贯,词数适当.
The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country,with more companies springing up in the market.The service not only brings great convenience to people,but causes some problems as well.
From my standpoint,bike-sharing system has become an essential part of public transportation in cities and should be actively promoted.Firstly,with an increasing number of people choosing the service to get around,the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically,which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams.Furthermore,this service also benefits individuals in various ways.For example,it provides locals and tourists with a convenient,cheap and healthy means of transport.Those who would otherwise use their own bicycles don't need to be concerned about such problems as theft,storage and maintenance.
In a word,bike sharing is an innovative service,which relieves urban traffic pressure and brings citizens enormous benefits.And more shared bikes should be launched into the market.